Black Poetry : with his pen

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  1. flojo

    flojo Active Member MEMBER

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    With his pen


    Almost feeling the stroke of his pen across the page
    Every word written seems to invade
    my passions
    my pleasures
    my fantasies
    my dreams
    Penetrating the substance of my soul with his scenes
    Yeilding to his ingenious verse
    Entranced with his inventive rhyme
    Lyrical composer subduing the sands of time
    Jonsin' for a line
    Another line of his ryhme
    I need a fix, a quick hit
    his poetry, sublime
    Erotic author, stimulate my mind
    He was, he is, he always had been
    killing me
    seducing me
    loving me....with his pen.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop here
    i feel ya on this...lol
    likes this..Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel every line..a great poet can do things with those words. Very nicely posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so sweet and beautiful
    poeticly someday i may be able to do this
    wow!!!!
    tyte
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Dip, this was all in... the inkwell!!!
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel U.

    This is what seperates people that write poems from poets, the feel.

    Very nice piece.