Black Poetry : With every step

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by YeshuJah, Jan 4, 2002.

  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    320
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Florida
    Ratings:
    +0
    I always knew it would be you,
    you-
    riding my night visions like a steed,
    thighs of steel, arms of velvet-
    breathe on me the breath and length
    of your sweet love;
    I pray JAH for inner strength
    to feel you on a daily basis,
    drink at your sweet osasis.
    When we occupy the same space
    my heart looses pace,
    skips and bumps to the thump, thump, thump,
    of the rythm you bring,
    spreads over me like a charm,
    keeps me warm,
    envelopes me in loving arms-
    incites me to write poetic verses
    that defy the stroke of my pen-
    baby I'm your rooster; be my hen,
    be my friend,
    let's take this way beyond now and then.
    Bring every rule ever made, let's bend it
    over backwards,
    with the forward march of desire
    raise the roof a coupl-a eternities higher,
    make the roots of love our covering,
    its foundation our chamber spot,
    each and every star a melody in our harmony-
    Baby c'mon,
    lie with me that we may rise
    in the wholeness of you and I-
    like the full moon in the strengh of its first bloom
    let us drown our senses in the honey molasses of
    moments felt forever in other lifetimes,
    in the name of Adam and Eve let us cleave,
    forever and eternally,
    forever and eternally-

    To Us, tO uS-
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 20, 2001
    Messages:
    1,004
    Likes Received:
    8
    Ratings:
    +10
    TYTE BRA!

    I'm feeling you all the way on this poet.
    Thanks for the read.
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 23, 2001
    Messages:
    1,495
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Education/Administrative
    Location:
    Metro Detroit
    Ratings:
    +0
    Hell Yeah!

    This one was soo on point Jah! Brilliant bruh!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    **** RIGHT

    feelin dis tyght down to earth flow u sho
    hit us wit mo.....!:)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 25, 2001
    Messages:
    4,182
    Likes Received:
    171
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Spreading Joy.... need some?
    Location:
    Sixburgh, Pa.
    Ratings:
    +221
    YeshuJah

    I enjoyed reading your flow. Very nice.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    YeshuJah

    I enjoyed every bit of this read!

    Especially lovin' your abstraction! Keep takin' me on a ride through you town of thoughts!


    .... Simply superb!

    N2
     
  7. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    320
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Florida
    Ratings:
    +0
    Thanks all

    Rashad, I appreciate the time you took to read the verse. Thank you.

    Reason, Glad you felt this is on point. I share that opinion too. Thanks.

    RICH, much love to you- you give much encouragement to all on this board, including myself. JAH Bless and thanks for the read.

    CocoB, glad you enjoyed this one. Love to you.

    N2urSoul, I enjoyed writing every bit of this, so I am glad you enjoyed every bit of it. I'll do my best to make the read worth the while.

    Love All, and a GOD Blessed New Year.
     
Loading...