Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Oct 11, 2001.
WITH EVERY WORD MY HEART BEAT FASTER
IT IS I WHOM SAVE U..........SISTA YA GLOW
IS SO BRIGHT I GOT MY SHADES ON.
"you… are… killing… me…soft-ly…
& i’m amorous-ly left wonder-ing…
if i save You… who’ll revive Me?"
Sunny ohhhhhh yeah you know I was diggin this like 6 feet and ma fave girl is above, who ??????
oh, yes, i'm lovin' it, dear friend! sweet sunshyne this is sooo tyght. but, you already know what i think, dear friend. i enjoyed every line in this piece as it so gracefully flowed. yes, such beautifully written love poetry as it captures a glimpse between two that are entwined. but, anyway, gahhh, it's tyght...as all of your pieces are just that!
Poetic stylimg genious at its best !
flow on sistah gurl flow on
this is love poetry at it's best...
I loved the build up and the way you ended it off...just too good!
kinda.."takes your breath away"
I feel you sis
all of this...so real...
and yes, when we love it can be difficult to know exactly what to do..."saving" someone else can be the death of....you....
awesome words of love, Ms. Sunshyne ... awesome....
this one brought the pain...
$$Rich-Ne$$. if i had to pick one person who i
could count on to "save" me... it would be You!! You
are the best!! thank You!!
ZorbShun. you like-did dat, huh? ... me too!!
thanks for the read sistah-dear!! i 'preciate you!!
Lister. where you been??!! i've been missin' my
constant love!! but hey! i'm glad to see you... as you
very well know!! thanks for supporting this piece.
Nat. you know you got me smilin', ryght?
thanks for ALWAYS reading me!!
KT. i am humbled by your response... thank You!
Alyce. if YOU say it's "awesome"... it must be!
thank you for takin' the time. ...brought the pain, huh?
Shery. i know how you feel about the "mushy"...
so i appreciate you leavin' something behind for me!!
AlwaysAlwaysLove MY sister!!
You've hit many nails right on the head with this piece. Feeling all of it...thank you .
Mr Edwards. it is a rare...but nonetheless...
spectacular occassion when you post a response to
one of my pieces... so... Thank You!... Much!
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