Black Poetry : With Closed Eyes

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  1. Breathless

    Breathless Member MEMBER

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    With Closed Eyes

    She dances with her eyes closed
    Every curve resonating a different beat
    Her flesh mimicking a cadence long lost
    Hips pushing stars into outer cosmos
    She is alone in her waltz of creation
    Secretly counting her exchange with NRG
    Dust shaken from her toes
    Oceans succumb to her rhythm
    Fingers snap to beckon the sun
    To be her spot light
    As she twirls
    Her whirls whistle
    Life

    2003 T. C. Hill
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  2. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like the typical optimistic the one who believes in love and finds her life long destiny is to welcome its coming in points of uncertainty and in times when its presence is defined clearly .....
    life is love and love is living.... your word are another affirmation to me thanks breathless
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yup!

    I'm feelin ya art Breathless... course you should know that...lol
    Keep em' comin!

    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt ya motion of scribe
    keep vibing dis heard loud
    life & love
     
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