Black Poetry : wishin on a sta

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mispelled titles
    the life idol
    we stuck in idol
    praying for titles
    we try recitals
    readings
    graphics
    nothing gets ***** off matresses
    quicker
    moving
    trying we **** near dyin
    to get up
    the ladder
    we build scafflin
    this space life is maddening
    cuz we float
    no gravity beyond
    secret agencies
    spied on by affirm acts
    and the jets still fly by dat

    dis is life
    dis is wrap
    wrapped around a bow
    tie
    tied up on a starry night
    thinkin how can i take flight
    take a trip
    from nasa into anotha world
    anotha realm
    distort fabric
    time travel
    and souls unravel
    before gravel
    just dirt
    findin true worth
    instead of figures
    and worth
    word's hurt

    if we fly, we ain't gotta see friends get murked
    dudes drop, skip, plagarize
    disguised enterprise
    into kens that lay
    i feel u klay
    scandal
    how we shouldn't have to handle
    and dandle, dwindle
    into a spindle
    selling dignity for stacks
    50 packs
    burnt out memorex
    membering u me, laughing
    what happen to that effect

    did it fly
    bird
    space
    hawks
    decompose
    into desert rose
    just trying to follow
    hollow pipe dreams
    holes on exterior have arms
    reachin in
    causin sin
    this flight we in
    is crashing
    ***** gotta be mo den smashin
    maybe da universe elevate da passion
    flying
    over layers hatred
    burnt the zone
    greed
    take flight
    warp speed
    if i could leave a breed
    dat bleed
    so shameful
    I'd leave my seed
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Don't run...don't hide...

    just face it.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with me.

    :toast:
     
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    tight drop
    enjoyed this
    thanks for sharing
     
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    I enjoyed this spread very much...keep it comming and thanks for sharing...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's what must be faced even if one care not
    this piece was tyte flow on
     
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    So much coming at us at once, hard to take, but yet we have to take it and make something positive out of it somehow. I like your flow.
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone
    i truly appreciate it
    u never know how a piece will be percieved
     
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