Black Poetry : wish i could talk how i write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jun 9, 2003.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i...

    sometimes find myself stagnant in speech...
    feeling like God put me in a
    specific place
    for a
    specific reason

    yet 'n still i
    can't find the
    spoken WORD
    to express what i have to...

    confused because
    i don't even know if i am
    s'posed to express
    in spoken word

    subCONSCIOUSLY
    i'm altered--
    mouth sewed
    shut

    im-ag-in-ar-il-lee
    when i got
    soooooooo
    much to say

    is it because i think thru things
    when the heart should show leadership?

    or am i lost in the thought of
    her.

    (it's her.)

    i wish i could talk (to her) like i write.



    espee.regretting
    :confused:
     
  2. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sooo nice. I wish I could talk (to her!) like I write. I get it. :) smiling on you!
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad you appreciate the writing Royal T.

    I thank you 1000's for the read!


    sean.revisited
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed wordz get in the way when we talk as to
    our pen flowin .......somethings just won't come out
    i feel ya .......Tyteeeeeeeeee open minded flow
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with $Rich$ I really liked your flow!!!! :wave: :heart:
     
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    tyte how u write i hope (she) can see it too
     
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    Delightful!!!
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya know...

    And I.....

    Well, it's like....

    I have nothing else to say 'cept...
    THIS IS TYTE!!!
     
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    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only conversation in the mind could be heard...as is
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i REALLY like this! i know the exact feelin':)
     
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