Black Poetry : wisenupoet composed "BEWARE"makuthnk

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Fam....
    My Baby wrote this piece and I loved it so, please feel free to share your views.

    You may be afraid of my blackness or afraid of my skin but look a little futher and you will see the tru person that lays within.
    When I was a child I was tought to do this and say that but me being me tought me to accept being black.
    Black in the mans world is tought to be evil, dirty, & symbal of hate. I was tought that black comes in all shades & colors this is why I have learned to appreciate.
    Beware of a strong black queen with her mind made up to suceed.Not only will she take over the world but she is full of intelect & full of capablities.
    In the man's eye she can never do right but always wrong. Just like her slave brotha & sista's singing those slave songs.
    When you took my ancestors you didn't know what you was getting into. Not only am I a product of Africa suprize I am a product of you.
    (Hate the maker not the creation) BEWARE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome wording and well felt motions here this was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this!!! tight scribing
    peace
    angel
     
  4. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANXXXXX 4 DA LUV!!!!!!!!
     
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    MOST WELCOME ........nfinite
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things that make you say hmmmm....Yes, how could we have suffered so without some after effects? This was on point.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I can relate to your story and wisdom that you laided out, and thanks for sharing this...bring some more.
     
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    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My feelings exactly queenie... I love to hear my baby's words spoken like a true poet!
     
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