Black Poetry : Wisely Give for Unity and Collective Growth

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  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (first movement)

    Working together
    To support a mighty plan
    Mounting the unsurmountable
    In this way, we can
    Each and everyone
    Provide our part
    From the resevoirs of mind
    From the depths of heart
    This macro multidimensional puzzle
    Needs the parts that you hold
    Needs you to offer them willingly
    Your talents are more precious than gold
    When you give them with the true spirit of charity
    Which is purification and cleansing your own soul
    The human reality needs wise generosity
    In order for it to be whole

    (second movement)
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    Unity
    un tie
    You and me
    And let us
    Be
    Free
    For Collective Prosperity
    Make words flow
    That make us grow
    Fertilize
    Increase the size
    Fecundate
    Before it's late
    Give from your excess
    More not less
    Min fadlak
    Please in Arabic
    Literally means this
    From your excess
    Break from greed
    Keep just what you need
    And give the rest to the deserving
    Assume the role of serving
    If you try and hoard the rest
    You get no rest at best
    That's the leadership stance
    That will enhance
    Our collective
    The true prospective
    Humanity deserves
    When it swerves
    From this righteous plane
    It goes insane
    So wisely give
    And help us live
    In peace
    Help chaos to ceace
    As we go forth and multiply
    Let us always try
    And succeed in unifying
    In the things that are edifying
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you are so on point with this fact in the flow..unity as one...a link plus another makes a strong chain...nice one
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was str8 to the point on target love da scribe
    flow on !
     
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    Love the Message!

    A message of humility, charity
    and ultimate acts selflessness for the
    greater good of humanity....

    Excellent & Inspiring Read!
     
  5. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, RICH, angelicsage,
    Thanks for the expressions of love and support for this piece.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it was very well done and i felt all of it too
    peace unto u brutha
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother,
    Thanks to you again and i'm yet agog over the breadth, range and depth of the site, it originator, and all of its staff and supporters.

    This is On It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :jawdrop:
     
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    this was on my so on point
    likin this drop.... :angel1:
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for liking this it's for us and fits the positivity of this site to a tee.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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