Quiet Poetry Lounge : wiped away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 15, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mental
    Vision inside working
    To play but my pen is dry
    My paper clean
    Thoughts wiped away
    Twisting tryin to develop
    A set goal…..to scribe
    A noun
    A verb
    A adjective
    Cant even feel a pro-noun
    Held within
    Reading between lines
    Trying to define
    Uplifting and peeking
    Just seeking
    A dead in hit
    Mental
    Vision inside working
    Dippin
    tryin to release
    but cant…
    for its been
    wiped away for now….. :bawling:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lost n' found
    what seem gone is only
    hidden in the mirror
    look deep and it's their
    the poetic scribe lay in
    the pen and is ready to
    leak to canvas only u
    look deep go beloveth
    and their u shall fine the
    flow .....
     
  3. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl the words will come back. just keep :read: :read:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all know it is not gone forever, your muse may be something as ordinary as a smile.
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl, even in writing this you have the power. u might not see the words on the blank page before you write them now but they will come.... sometimes you need to dig deep into your heart it will come flowing out.... u keep the faith!
    much love
     
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    I know how you feel....

    I been havin a serious mental block myself.. :help: ......but hope it will soon past.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam
    at times i know we
    all go into this little
    block thing
    but it comes back....
    as long as you dont
    think to hard on it
    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
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    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    I know this feeling

    You were describing my writer's block....beautiful....I feel as though you were speaking to me....You go my sista!!
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    writers block...
    inspiration on lock
    is def' the pits...
    I feel this...
     
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