Black Poetry : winter's breeze...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It came from the East
    Sweeping through valleys of trees
    Across Southern Plains of
    Leftover tumbleweed

    Can you feel it?

    It swept low
    As full moon’s glow crawled
    Along the ocean’s face
    …Stirring the loins of spring
    As old, oak trees renew their
    Shade dominance

    Can you feel it?

    Caressing wave after wave
    Of wide open sea
    Before whistling
    Through the hood

    Can you feel it

    Tiptoeing along dust particles
    Of polluted skies
    Racing hills and hollows
    Of desolate lands
    Whipping the sands
    Of the dunes
    From crest to crest

    Feel it…if you can
    It’s harsh hand
    Reshaping foundations
    Of good and bad relations

    Can you feel it?

    With whom does winter’s breeze mate
    If not the four corners
    Of the universe
    As GOOD fornicates with EVIL
    And losers raise their voice
    In cheer

    Winter’s breeze washed over me
    I could not hear the roar
    …could not see temptation
    Placed before me
    ‘til my heart stood still

    Can you feel it?

    Can you?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller ...man again u came sweet and my mental been open
    smooth vibe poet!
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin the tempo of your flow.

    I can feel it, I can.
     
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    very skillfully written, Poet!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as winter exhales its last breath, feel the freshness of spring on the horizon.:)

    THANKS...fellow scribes...for feeling this.

    1.
     
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    Feeling it, Hearing it! for sho...

    GRAND SLAM MY BROTHER!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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