Black Poetry : WINTER_GLASS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Starlight moon glaze upon da pond
    half frosted, half glass as i looked
    inside da image before me
    what i saw was da past before me
    a future after me.
    What was in between wasn't clear
    the reflection drifted
    showing moments of happiness n' sorrow
    displaying hurt n' pain through my eyez
    a discovery of hope
    there was this bright flashy glair of morrow
    no boundary in da fields of beded flowers
    blooming love and change of life
    I felt a passion of warmth under this icy age
    da winter glass reveil guilty and sin
    a rize dat's untouchable yet close.


     
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    after reading this it left me speechless...it was so soft and easy and I just melted nice write poet one for my wall ya think?
     
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    Thank you i was thinking out loud an pen it down for some reason.........
     
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    well your thoughts were pen sooth and easy my friend
     
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    Hello Sir. Richness...

    I enjoyed the image those words produced.

    Thanks:)

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Thank you sista MzBlkAngel2

    yes it do produce a beautiful image thank u sis Cocobutterskyn for the visit and vision