Black Poetry : Winter on its way….

moham

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A clear white morning
Blinded us,
all seem bright
Everything looked
Pure and white

but the feeling went away
and with it did the colors
and true colors make a day
so what reason it gives to stay

and the flocks they kept on falling
silently they froze us up
so anxiously awaiting, praying
the snowing it will stop.
 

lilcherry76

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i don't know why, nobody replied, i guess because your flow sounds like those poems out of school books, and not a lot of people feeling school., but i'm listening.............continue....... :hi:
 

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~The hidden library...~
love your writing poet...
this poem made me reminisce
of the season and also
made me think metaphorically
about seasons...

Great rhythm imagery and emotion...

Nice work!
Sage
 

moham

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Thank you Licherry...and Thank you Angel

I had a feeling nobody, or hardly anybody would reply. I decided to post it anyways....:grin: , cause i like it. This is piece is quite old, simple and unfinished, but what it means to me personally counts more to me than the quality.
The coming of a particular winter marked the ending of a relationship I had. Cause we grew cold and distant. That's it....

but thanks for reading and responding so kindly.

greets
moham
 

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