Black Poetry : WINTER MAZE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beyond thy cold of winter flyte
    warm embrace our silent night
    forth our hearts beaten as light
    from a love that feels so right

    Her gentle kiss & sensual bliss
    send my mind into a maze of wish
    together we become a full dish
    let not my tyme be missed

    Her face gleam as winter garden
    where thee eyez glist as snow
    skin as perky as blossom rose
    soeth my love continue to grow

    O' my beloveth forth i am
    inside da maze of ya fairy
    upon da devotion i so bare
    with my hand i touch and arms i hold

    Ye' cometh by true love
    look inside my slumbering eyez
    where only thy honest of love reside
    and my heart spool blood i share

    Thee nobel of ye grace i place
    each moment trace'd
    flickering flames outcast da cold
    deep desires my loveth rose

    where art thee i so lone
    in this winter maze so strong
    in foreverness as repeat i'll clone
    again and again just to have u
    near my walls of chamber

    I so loveth thee
    rest now as i am da temple
    ya spirit now dewell
    tonight we share fate
    wit passionate trust & realism

    here i am in winter maze !
     
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    Amnat77 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way it flows Rich; but is the combination of the shakespearan english and Ebonics intentional?
     
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    thankz and yes it was , it's what makes the it twisted side come out !
     
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    The warmth of your words shields against the brisk chill of winter. Beautiful write.
     
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    Thank u so much sista watz , i guess it's time to embrace your words and
    praise always warm my heart
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm that winter maze sounds like something hott...lol
    like yo flow on dis rich, very lovable

    blackluv and bp
     
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    yes it does don't it
    i find the winter to be the hottest times
    thank u so very much sis w/luv
     
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    Hi Rich
    from a love that feels so right
    warmth comes from the winter maze
    its a flame that your poem have build
    and a peace I feel still..wow
    much love my brother
    very very nice

    Peace & Love
     
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    Thank u sis your words means so much to me happy to see u around again
    now don't leave me no more.....smile bluewater
     
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    wintery glo returns
     
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