Black Poetry : winelight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Jul 9, 2001.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i remember pathway distant at first
    the cork stopped quietly dead for an instant
    reflected by moonlit silk
    still...as time slowed
    twinkling sparkles are no match for the quest
    tick stepping on plush carpet
    warmed as a feeling of my familiar
    tuned in the crackle of fire
    leaning softly to kiss her brow
    the labels are removed
    eyes glazed over upon contact
    smiling a thousand sun rays
    as lips change to touch change to one
    her leg falling open, tipping the glass
    my cup empties
    sweet nectar annoints my pallate
    and again i am satisfied...
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling

    the piece

    the flow

    the love

    nice piece dun
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been too long since I've read you DJ

    A beautiful flow....as always

    *drink*
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice to see you're still on the planet, Jay...

    but, hey...i understand how it be when the legs fall open and the spell is cast...and the reeling in of the ways is afoot. keep the river flowing, my brutha.

    WELCOME HOME.
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Haaaaaaay Derrick Jay :wave:

    did i say thanks for coming home?

    this is love

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES DES BE OF LOVE
    SO MUCH COMFORT I FEEL
    THROUGH U..........KEEP FLOW'IN!
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ!

    Flow -- flow on--the Floaters--this was nice--sweet, to the point and effortless--paints a sweet picture in a small space--this is expertise--Amun-Ra

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