Black Poetry : Window watching

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell me why you consume my every waking hour

    And my entire universe seems to revolve around you

    And you don't even know we breathe the same air

    If I was to walk by you I'd be just a face in the crowd

    But I know you down to last hair upon your head

    I know that your skin is the color of mocha espresso

    Your eyes are brown tinted like fresh ground cinnamon

    You got just one dimple that twinkles when you smile

    And to say you got a body of a god is an understatement

    And your long dreadlocks blow in the wind as we pass

    I see you every morning as you past my office window

    Daily I say I am going to gather my nerves and speak

    But everyday the cat captures my tongue as you pass

    Maybe tomorrow I'll actually make your acquaintance

    But till then I'll just be peeking out the window at you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now see, where I work I don't get any views like that, lol. He sounds scrumptious, not sure if this is an actual experience, but if it is, you'll never know for sure, til you take a step. Very sensually descript poet.
     
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    whoa ....window watching again i see tyte look out
     
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    arent we all familiar with that!!!

    get up and get em ma !!!

    g'won wit ya bad self !!!

    nice poem,nice metaphors..you had it all in there
     
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    asimplepoet:
    Wish the view from my 31st floor office was
    so nice.:)
    Luv this scribe...
     
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