Black Poetry : WINDOW watching

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Just beyond our tomorrow
    lay hope to end hate
    to open pathway future
    on the helmz of brotherly love

    Where we stand on battle fields
    in the wars of confussion
    labored in the mist of oppression
    de-con-press-ed

    Between spiritual beliefs
    nationalities and blood
    there's a morrow ahead
    which we lead into by our own
    set decalogue

    Running in a decathlon of betterment
    fighting our own souls
    not understanding the mission within
    by years of mental slavery

    This become deeper divison
    between unification to be unjustifiable
    lives wilt on the thron of sadness
    weaken by the surge of bittersweet

    The taste or sour harps
    playing fircy tunes upon da landz
    through this window i see
    through this window i feel
    through this window of pain
    the hurt and the deeds of destroyer

    I close my eyez again
    in hope not to become a candidate
    reopen to calculate the destruction
    not given but passed down
    Through this window of none-sense

    I knoweth as darkness continue
    to close in yet i see beauty
    a will and need so i stand watching.

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beyond the darkness there is light, no matter how dim. But sometimes we have to force ourselves to see it, even if we have to temporarily close our eyes. Peace be still.
     
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    so true watz , sometime we see what we wish not to see
    then look for understanding for it ........Thankz.
     
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    Dam I bow to you
    I see why you are our
    Reigning Poet Of The Year
    Cant touch you bruh
    I see the destroyer
    No one wants to be a candidate
    For what my eyes cant see
    Is what is killing me
    Much Love Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true , tantrum no one wants to be but often find self
    as one and getting votes , a race many will have to learn
    to drop out of .......Thank u for the visit and words to peace.
     
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    watching through the maze of tomorrow
    my heart floods and my eyez dem
    for all i've seen through this window .
     
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    and as i look through this window i see a lovely vision and its you Rich!!!!! what a fine write continue on please.:luvu: :terrific:
     
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    Thankz for the visit and warmth to my soul Nevar
     
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    Very nice write rich!
     
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    :juggle: Wow you mesmerize me everytime. I am feelin this piece as always you are awesome...:juggle:
     
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