Black Poetry : window vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 26, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Look out my window
    as she pass by
    and say to myself
    i'm the luckest guy
    to have a girl like her
    who brings me a
    sunshine
    of all the fellows in
    the world she choose
    me
    every night on my
    knees i pray
    to see another day
    heavenly
    sweetly
    she means that much
    to me openly my
    love send da words
    to her affectionly and
    a dream come true
    to have a girl like her
    with all the radiant
    beauty and essence
    of joy her caressin
    heart lingers next to me
    I sit in the mirror
    the image of me
    cascade into her
    face upon mines
    like we where to be
    and really she don't
    even know me
    but to have a girl
    like her
    wit all the comfort
    in da world she
    embrace me sweetly
    now the time has come
    i need her next to me
    she truely to be so
    baby :callme:
    anytime anywhere anyway
    u please coz i'm love struck
    stuck in ya temple of love
    harvesting deep in ya soul
    so from my window i watch
    as u walk by and say to
    myself i'm a lucky guy coz
    my heart say
    :luvu:
    each and every day that
    pass us by i'm a lucky guy
    call O-N-E-L-O-V-E now
    i'm waiting
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when a man say he is lucky to have the love of his Queen...
    he have true love for her...
    i am pretty sure when she looks out her window...
    she feel just the same
    the luckiest woman in the world
    to have your love as well....
    very sweet and loving flow...
    breaking down huh...
    why dont you give her a call..
    let her know you love her just the same
    and nothing aint changed......
    Peace Angel
     
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    Rocks your world does she

    Who 'dat girl, Richie $$RICH$$?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Angel surely she will know
    by the beat and flow
    that it never change
    and my love still da same
    she may not understand not
    but it was GOD'S plan
    his will and asking so i am
    even if she don't really know me
    she feels my heart of love floating
    rocking my world of exsistance
    no call needed she will see me through
    my writting on da wall .........Thankz for the words & visit from my window

    1poet .....man she takes me higher , deeper into the vision of her love
    and i taste the essence she seem to linger behind she is the radiant
    of beauty in heart the warm smile of sunshine and my star bright of da
    solo darkest night she shy and sweet gentle and meek i'm such a lucky
    guy to have a girl like her .Thankz brutha from da window of love
     
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    Congratulations Brother Rich!
    With so many people claiming
    that, that special someone isn't
    out there, Is nice to here you
    found one.


    Beautiful write!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed purple what a lucky guy i am .........
    to have a girl like her to make all my dreams
    come true of all the fellows in da world she belongs to me
    Thanks sis..........
     
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    indeed feels your every line
    you pose....your welcome
    Beautiful writeto let one know
    your close when your far
    .....hmmmm do that make sense
    i know she is very honored...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sweetie, SHE is the lucky one. This is a princely flow from one most dear.
     
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    thankz angel again !

    wow!!! u think so gempis really she da lucky one !
    i know my heart and my faith my love and grace
    but ! ummmmmm! well i hear ya thankz a million what a dear friend .
     
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    As she looks out the window, I'm sure she sees your vision as well, exhaling deeply as you walk on by. Two mirror images merging into one...wow...just the thought of that is mesmerizing. Magical flow Rich.
     
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