Black Poetry : WINDOW vision pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Slowly passing
    as she walk by
    pumpin my heart
    as hers meet mines
    by da bow da arrow
    :hearts2: :hearts2:
    cascading deeply
    the feelings take me
    on a journey with a
    passion she may never
    understand or know
    i wonder if she even
    see me looking from
    da hour glass of my
    window my heart lone
    for her so long ago
    i've watched her write
    i've felt her flushing
    beat on my mind
    she come by like da
    silent of night a gallop
    wind cross my face
    and my love cascade out
    in search of a depth
    of beauty i see her smile
    glist in glow to a bright
    shinning ray and i become
    feverish all ova my body
    i sit and look out the window
    in a vision of us and what
    we are to be and feel the
    rapture of truth and wonder
    if, just maybe! will it ever be?
     
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    cascading deeply
    deeply cascading
    i know your there
    looking within the hourglass
    but for you already know the answer
    as you sit a heart of wonder
    a smile that sends you
    as the giggles make you feverish
    this spoke to me wow!!!!
    baby you already know if it will ever be
    loving the part 2 of the vision
    flow head on.....break it down

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    awesome piece, I like the flow of this one...keep droping the love.
     
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    thankz angel u feel da cascading of love entering da moment of night

    thankz queen happy u are enjoying the moment of my pen love

    y'all far too sweet and kind i wuv ya yes i do .............ty again ladies
     
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    Beautiful vision of love that continues to cascade, floating outside your window, almost close enough to touch. Wow....
     
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    feeling it indeed now ya know i want more....bring the essence
    b/c its already alive....awesome flowing Rich
     
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    yes indeed watz.......
    so close i can taste da sweet beauty thy Queeneth from
    da window of love in vision i see her walking slowly and
    divine in my eyez i see her deep love from da words ......

    sho ya right sistah angel as it smooth out in motion
    from da window of love inside my vision of sweetness.....
     
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    :angel1: is there a part 3....QQ
     
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    Oh I'm loving this one :hearts3: I know this feeling......as i wonder if my eye candy and me would ever be a reality
     
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    chastity tru indeed it can be a sweet reailty of u and ya candy
    keep ya eyez on the prize
     
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