Black Poetry : Window Shopping

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Nov 18, 2002.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I sat across the tables from you in the restaurant the other night
    And as I looked into your beautiful brown eyes
    My mind wondered what you were thinking
    What makes you smile
    And then you smiled at me
    All night long we exchanged eye to eye embraces
    becoming more and more familiar with each others faces
    Sly smiles and visual hugs
    As you stood to leave
    I watched you walk away and as you smiled and looked my way
    I wanted to stand and kiss you goodbye
    But the beautiful women sitting to my side
    would have tanned my Hyde
    So remember me as I remember you
    I guess you already know that I enjoyed the view
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aint nothin wrong

    with a little window shoppin from time to time...

    nice peice.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha ha ha ha wow, this is universal many ppl have these feelings "secretly" glad you could put it into wordz, thank you
    lol
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you do this often don't you? ;) -7
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LiLi
    you know just lookin
    Thank you

    Desert Storm
    just keepin it real
    Thank you for the view

    wildflower7
    now their you go puttin my **** all out there in the street
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz

    this seems like you would like to do a little bit more than look...or am I just readin' too much into the situation....

    K
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shazzy!


    i absolute-ly love-did it!! :D

    you always sneakin' **** in & givin' it an
    unexpected twist!! imma go read this one
    again!!

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Katana
    well
    Thank you for the view

    elayne
    Thank you for the love
     
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