Quiet Poetry Lounge : Will You?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jun 11, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will you think of me
    when I'm lost and deserted
    cuz you know I don't deserve this
    will you remember
    summers swimming in love
    it was only us
    and the stars above
    will you think about
    promises you broke
    along with my heart
    from the very start
    will you remember
    my dedication
    to endless celebrations
    that you never took part in
    will you forget about
    my fingers clearing your mouth
    when your seizures came about
    will you block out
    that look on my face
    that you can't erase
    when you were caught at his place
    I will remember
    never to give my heart
    til it's done on both parts
    and I'll never forget
    to change all the locks
    and not believe a word that comes from your mouth
    the day he kicks you out
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was knee-deep. I liked the way you rounded this off...take your time and let love take it's course...for surely it will come again, it's something you can't stop. thanks for sharing this with us.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you beautiful. All you wrote is true. Can't rush it. Sometimes heartbreak is a blessing.
     
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    It's only a blessing if you learn and grow from it, other wise it's called...
    glutton for pushishment.
     
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    awesome drop this was tyte lovin da flava of dis one
     
  6. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True...don't wanna be that. Thank you Queen.

    $$RICH$$....
    :peace: always brotha. Thanks
     
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    Applause!

    I enjoyed this poem
    !
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Carrie. :luvv:
    Glad you enjoyed the poem.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this poem...and the end was the bomb....
     
  10. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Angel as always. You are the bomb. :bomb: :bomb: