Black Poetry : Will You?

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  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I take my hands
    place one on each of your cheeks
    tattoo a stare into your eyes
    with sincerity say that I love you
    Would you embrace the magic?
    or become another chapter in my life?

    Does it trouble you
    that I’ve stumbled over adore
    and fell into your air?
    Will your temper rise and pick me up
    directing my interest away from your love
    or would you share your atmosphere?

    Will it embarrass you
    If I share our glory with the world?
    Would you detach your soul from mine
    or sing praises with me in harmony
    no matter who's the audiences ?
    Will you be the man that I need?






    ©2003amberly
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    will you
    make me feel like a man
    even when
    thats not the plan
    will you
    feel my pain
    without the need
    for me to explain
    will you
    school me
    instead of trying
    to rule me
    will you
    hold your flower for me
    or
    give it away
    for free

    i felt you on this piece....scribe on
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, this was indeed nice...almost feels like I'm in the position now. How do you ask these questions in real life...the drama! :)
     
  4. sexe1

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    Nice piece

    Amberly, we can only hope that we are so lucky to find the one you speak of. Again nice piece.

    Sexe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and when i hold u
    pulling u close in warm
    embrace
    will it make a different
    and silently accept ya stare
    will the magic tingle

    as i whisper softly unto u
    that it's u i adore
    will u face the true love of me
    and understand this the beginning
    of a new chapter composed

    as we share our mental
    and hold grasp to the atmosphere
    will u bond as one
    and feel da depth of me
    as we sing in melodies
    of sweet grace
    as i trace da smiles on ya face
    and be the King the soulful
    Queen dreamth of

    will u let me caress u
    and listen intently
    as u speak
    and comfort ya fears
    kiss away ya worries
    can it be of such
    holding hands in a
    gentle clutch
    that gives a rush
    to tingle ya soul
    can i pose this single rose
    and sho i care
    hummmmm!!!!
    yes i can he u so dreamth of !
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get It, Amberly!

    1poetsought ~
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get him......back him into a corner...:Smile:
     
  8. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sure hope not, for i long to tell the world that i love u..
    i long for the freedom to want u openly without fear of rejection.
    will u walk away if i hold u close and tell everybody u are the one that makes my heartbeat, that keeps it moving even in moments of stillness...

    lo'
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if l were him, l know l would..

    nfinite....