Black Poetry : Will You Be Strong

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is one of those days
    It is one of those things
    A state of affairs beyond control
    And, despite what is right
    Plus, your effort to fight
    The moments do not go like you'd hoped they’d go
    She is so close to you now
    And you barely know how
    Her approach was so subtle and slow
    Arousal, her objective
    She will, d#mn sure, get it
    As she reaches to touch, and it grows

    You cannot avoid her
    You cannot ignore her
    Situations put you near her each day
    But, you have a woman
    All and all, a good one
    Thus, you’ve done your utmost to maintain.
    But, daily her lips tease you,
    Hinting of ways they can please you
    As she casually speaks of games she likes to play
    Because, the flesh can be weak,
    From the type of words she speaks,
    You’ve been caught in these moments of this day.

    Now, you are together, alone
    You are away from your home,
    Prepared to experience what she’s created in your mind
    Softly, her lips kiss you
    She seems ready to give you,
    All of the pleasures she insinuated you'd find
    And as a man you're prone,
    Despite your lady at home,
    To be caught-up with her intricate design
    The question: Will you be strong…
    Or will do your woman wrong?
    When the weakness of the flesh will not let you decline
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this last line...answers the question for most...
    this was so intriguing...urging you to get to
    the next line and the next line...and the next
    to find out the ending...

    Great sense of anticipation captured
    in this flow...^5...Poet!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight scribing
    i was so caught in this
    from top to bottom
    very nice
    like
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the grass looks GREENER on the other side. And the rest is history....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a masterful scribe ya pen is speaking awesomely
     
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    tyte scribe. i think we all can relate to this situation in some ways.much love :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You definitely kept our interest to the end here. Too bad the flesh can't see into the future, huh? Tyte write.
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelig the love... I my delighted to grap interest.
    I relate well because I've... SEEN it firsthand :wink:
     
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