Black Poetry : Will You Be Strong (peep this one!)

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is one of those days
    It is one of those things
    It becomes a situation beyond your control.
    And, despite what is right,
    despite an endeavor to fight
    The moments do not go like you'd hoped they’d go.

    She is so close to you now
    And you barely know how
    For, her approach was so subtle and slow.
    Your arousal is her objective
    She is, d*mn sure, going to get it,
    As she reaches to touch you, and it grows

    You cannot avoid her
    No, you cannot ignore her
    Since, your situation puts you around her everyday
    You realize you have a woman
    All things considered, a good one
    So, you have done your best to resist and maintain.

    But, daily her lips tease you,
    Hinting of ways they can please you
    As she casually speaks of games she likes to play
    Because, the flesh can be weak,
    Because of words she consistently speaks,
    You’ve been caught in these moments of this day.

    Now, you are together, alone
    You are away from your home,
    prepared to experience what she’s created in your mind
    Softly, her lips kiss you
    She seems ready to give you,
    All of the pleasures she insinuated you'd find.

    And as a man you're prone,
    despite your lady at home,
    to be caught-up with her intricate design.
    The question: Will you be strong…
    Or will do your woman wrong…
    Knowing how such offers are difficult to decline?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow what a question...hmmm which way he gonna go...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhh
    feeling your views in this flow
    yes indeed
    wow
    Peace
     
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    Tight piece.

    My answer: only boys trapped in a man's body play these kind of games.

    And since I'm not married I can taste the nectar and not be ashamed.

    But I'd have to forsake all others once those vows have been exchanged.

    Just go home to the wife, put a wig on her head, so you can call her the other woman's name.
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you think, "positive" and that is ideal for a perfect world. But, a perfect world it is not... so sometimes things are not always so simple.

    Thanks for reading, and the personal thoughts.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaa! feel ya on dis one
    tyte scribe ....how do one get out
     
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