Black Poetry : Will you be my Valentine?

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got to a question to ask ya
    are you going to remain tha [email protected]

    and not give me what i want
    I know this holiday you say is about putting on airs and fronts

    but the idea of Valentine
    is too simply be with the one you love sipping on some wine

    That day doesnt mean anything to you
    Really I think you think the holiday's for fool

    For two years now never a card or a word
    and how I allowed you to get on my nerves

    with baby maybe next year
    you go away to leave me with unending tears

    as I wish to be showered with your love
    I mean with the flowers and candy the feeling from coming from above

    Its just anotha day
    you go your way

    and then after Valentine comes my Birthday
    Disappointed for one holiday to the next and still i wait for you to say

    Happy Birthday Baby
    and to hear from you the next day [email protected] your lazy

    But still I hope this year will be different
    cause Im your significance
    and you will surprise me asking me to dance

    into the night
    lights down low with the scent of dinner im thinking everything alright

    and you say baby go put that on
    while i'm putting on a favorite song

    and I go and get ready
    cause my baby about to rock me steady
    as he start it off with some Freddy (jackson with you are my lady)

    and you begin to sniff me take me in
    you hear me moans as you whisper something sexy im exclaiming it depends

    if you
    tell me this aint a fantasy but the truth

    that my baby finally saw the light
    and he's going to give me this Valentine and My Birthday hopefully in the same night

    but the sound of the microwave disrupts my thought
    Im thinking [email protected] anotha daydream to keep in my vault

    and then the phone rang and its you
    i take a deep breath and sigh on what Im about to
    To enjoy Valentine/My Birthday this year is what I wanna do

    and I say

    Will you be my Valentine?:heart:



    (Ya'll have to stay tune to find out if I get my wish or your probably see me right beside Ray J talking about if I had one wish part Two!!!!!!!!)
    :heart:
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww
    Baby gurl I will be ya valentine...
    Let me quit...
    I can relate to dis sis keep keeping on sis...
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my valentine Soblessed............

    oh my god somebody loves me baby whoa, whoa somebody loves me baby and you know who it is. ok im through singing ms. Patti Labelle. Thanks soblessed i guess it will be single's tonight since you can relate. you bring the hits and i bring some shyte. and well laugh all nite long babygurl. thanks for the love sista i's do mean it. :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very romantic piece
    Daydream your heart away
    Loved the drop Nevar
    Looking for part 2
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
    In anticipation for part2.
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved it sis... gotta wait a minute to know if i'ma get my valentine... dang it... we all waiting... lol... flow on sis...

    BTW.... Hey we haven't had a good three way conversation in well over a week. We need to remedy that. Yeah.. I know I've been MIA... So Sorry Sistas
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou for your love and support tant
    and sweetbabyface always.
    :ilu: :heart:
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love shown ifucomesoftly we must have a showdown pretty pretty soon. music that is dj want u play this gurl a love song!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    REAL TIGHT ONE NEVAR LOVING THE WAY YOU DAYDREAM
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blacksoul for the love boo. always you have given me.:hearts1: :hearts1:
     
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