Black Poetry : will there be the day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by J-Row, Feb 4, 2004.

  1. J-Row

    J-Row Member MEMBER

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    YOU GET UP AND ITS A NEW DAY
    WONDERING WHAT WILL BE THE GENDER FOR TODAY
    GO TO THE BATHROOM AND WASH YOUR FACE
    LOOK AT YOURSELF IN THE MIRROR FEELS LIKE YOUR DRIFTEN INTO SPACE
    OPEN YOUR EYES WITH A LIGHT OF BRIGHT TO COME OUT
    BUT BEHIND YOUR MIND IS SO MUCH DOUBT
    WILL THERE BE THE DAY IN THE FUTURE TO SEE SUCCESS COME UPON YOU
    '' '' '' '' '' I STOP LEAVING FROM CHECK TO CHECK
    '' '' '' '' '' I STOP WORKING SO HARD FOR THE WHITE MAN
    '' '' '' '' '' WHEN YOU COME HOME YOUR BACK WON'T HURT
    '' '' '' '' '' YOU CAN TO THE BANK TO SEE UR LARGE BALANCE
    '' '' '' '' '' VOICES SAYING MOMMY,HONEY ,WE LOVE YOU AND THEN COME EMBRACE YOU WITH LOVE
    WILL THERE BE THE DAY YOU SAY TO THE LORD THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL LIFE
    WILL THERE EVER BE THAT DAY :angel1:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and Welcome:wave:
    this is a nice poem
    i am graceful for the day
    lovely flow
    please do share more
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    dis was very nice flowin continue on
    welcome
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J-Row,

    We all want to see that day. Keep sharing as we strive together.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we so often over look
    our blessings...
    Very nice flow!