Black Poetry : Will the sun ever shine on me?

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will the sun ever shine on me?

    Will the sun ever shine on me?

    Will the sun ever shine on me?

    I have been places no girl should ever go

    I have seen things no child should ever go thru

    I blame the lack of support for the way that I am

    I was told to forgive, forgive, forgive

    How can I forgive when the harm was done to me?

    Done to me

    Done to me

    Done to me

    I cant forgive you nor forget you

    This internal rage has me in prison

    Encaged with all the hurt and shame

    But you won't get the best of me

    Even tho' the world already has

    Already has

    You label me as a has been all washed out

    But see what's washed out is you

    Yes, you may have tormented me, plague my body

    with indecent exposure

    Exposure

    Exposure

    To sex

    Sex was an escape for you, but was a curse to me

    Curse to me

    I carried on like a marathon runner the torch

    To satisfy my urges, my need

    The same sick and twisted need you have for me

    For me

    I hate you

    I can't stand you

    You have made me not know the meaning of

    Real love

    Real love

    But see now Love has found me

    Found me

    You won't hurt me no more

    No more

    Because God has seen fit for me to smile

    I say smile

    I use to write about sadness, darkness and depression

    No recession, no molesting, no amount of bull the world has spewed upon me

    You can shun me

    For too long have I carried this burden of self-hate within me

    Causing me to not love the ones I'm with

    I'm with

    I love me

    I love you

    I love me

    I love me

    Love

    Me

    Is all he wants to do

    Never mind the past

    Because the past is the past

    And nothing bad will ever last

    So devil I declare and put you on blast

    That the sun as long as I have God on my side

    "THE SUN WILL ALWAYS SHINE ON ME!"





    LAVETTE112/NEVAR112

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  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ok you almost had me

    your ending showed me otherwise

    POWER TO YOU MY SISTA

    hang on to what you know to be right

    and rid yourself of what you know to wrong

    and you seem to be doing that

    NUFF SAID

    PEACE
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    nevar,

    Glad you made it through, with flying colors! This is truly a blessing, and we enjoy this with you. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the outcome, this is great!

    Will the sun ever shine on me? YES

     
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    wow navar.....this really spoke volumes. I can relate to alot of what you are saying here.

    Great flo sis, hope to keep seeing more of you!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who have showed me some love on this flow!:smooch:
     
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    In the Spirit of Sanokofa!





    Thanks for the smooch nevar, received from your tender lips:heart:
     
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    surely the sun will shine brighter then ever
     
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    thank you all for giving me love on this piece!
     
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    The sun is already shining...

    he
    can’t pull
    your strings nor
    push buttons anymore
    those
    times long gone
    past tense are the days
    Of him manipulating
    you

    an
    innocent girl
    used and abused is
    dead
    and
    buried
    and…
    resurrected
    a
    Woman
    birth with the knowledge
    you

    are

    worthy

    his
    worthlessness
    no longer a needed accessory
    in your life

    he
    is the past
    you don’t dare forget
    because there was a lesson
    in him and dealing with all his mess
    you
    won’t make
    the same mistake
    twice
    for
    you
    now can
    recognize from
    a mile away his kind
    that live life behind lies
    and disguises

    you
    are
    woman

    and...

    we

    hear

    your

    roar!



    Nevar, your words were deeply felt, so much
    that I was led to flow. I can appreciate the
    deep emotions conveyed in your piece.
    Thanks for sharing it with us.

    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
  10. mizjoice

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    it's your time to shine, my sister.....some sister is going thru what you have been through and needs to know that some day the sun will shine on her, too. Powerful flow.......
     
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