Black Poetry : Will I Look Pretty

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  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When angels float and butterflies fly
    will I look pretty when I die

    when the water washes my sins away
    and takes me to another place
    where no judgement falls
    no harsh words are spoken
    and the threads of my life
    remain unbroken

    when smooth waves glide over me
    taking my breath away
    and my head is filled with visions
    of a myriad of colours and peaceful scenes
    when I finally see the light
    does this mean I'm free

    when my soul floats on high
    leaving my body afloat on the water
    and my troubles are buried beneath the waves
    will the chains that held me bound
    fall freely to earth
    never to be found

    when my spirit soars and an angel flies
    will I look pretty when I die

    (c) nfn 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Kitana kitana kitana !!!!

    beautifully written piece
    indeed u will be as lovely as u r now
    yes ya soul will be free
    many smiles surround this piece
    judge be not forth ya living say it all when u fall
    u will be pretty indeed:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Kitana,

    This is beautiful and sad.

    It's very nice to see you work back on the board. I missed it.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    KT.


    when we shed these earth-ly bodies... in preparation
    for the journey home... we'll all be oh-so beautiful!! :)

    thank you for sharing this... it's good to see you!!

    AlwaysPeace&Love.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...thanks for reading...I guess I was asking could we really be free of all the pain and heartache..will we look pretty in the non-physical sense...and if we commit suicide (a sin) do we still get to go to heaven....thanks for the input

    Coco...thanks this started as a comment from someone who was very sad and lonely and it got me thinking about things...
    ps..been on a mental holiday..trying to introduce some new thoughts to my pages...I see you on the other hand are on fire..;)

    GA...I was hoping that was the case..that no matter how we leave the earth, we all travel the same journey..

    K
     
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    this is a beautiful peace Kitana

    your beauty is to the core
    so the answer is yesssss!

    :)
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Destee

    you humble me with your reply..

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND I SAY

    STILL YES HE'S A JUST GOD !:)
     
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