Black Poetry : Wildflowers

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please….
    Don’t touch me like that
    Don’t do this to my heart
    This is getting deep
    As your love seeps through
    My love seems to grow…
    Feeling like the earth is moving
    Please…don’t
    As I say no...
    ....My heart says yes

    Like wildflowers dancing in rain
    Our hearts get caught up….
    As the starz form our destiny
    You begin to mold me
    And hold me tight
    You got me….
    Feeling like a teenage girl
    ….all over again
    Knowing I am full woman
    But…
    The warmth of you…
    Pulls me in deeper
    As you kiss me here and there
    I can hear the bells
    …..sounding off
    As you venture on
    I am feeling strange
    But feeling good
    Too much seems weird
    Twisted in this wind…
    Got me going insane
    As you explore my lower region
    Wanting it to last….
    Speaking low…
    Telling you yes…
    As you take charge
    ….and change your position
    I wanna call your name
    ….but I can’t
    As the passion runs deep
    It’s like I am under your spell
    As I commit
    I wanna grab the sheets
    ….as you feast
    Full submission of my body
    Like in a trance…I give you
    I wanna yell…no!
    But more…yes!
    Taking me on a ride
    Rolling in stride
    With perfect pride
    Loving your treasure
    With pleasure
    Taken in every measure
    Up and down we go
    Like chariots in the sky
    Our love twisting in and out
    Passion called our name
    As we share this night....
    ....becoming ONE

    (C) 2005
    Just writing
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum Angel....I could feel ya energy & passion all up in this piece...Scribe on, sista....scribe on!

    Peace,
    Driz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreamy and sensual at the same time. I enjoyed the flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    steamy sweet and wet !
    whewwwwww love dis one
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    ...you captured the duality
    that so often stirs beneath a fiery passion well
    wanting it and not wanting it
    saying no...but steadily following the flow
    love the feel of contradication
    and the sense of uncontrollable craving you created here

    nice theme...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love family!!!

    Peace
    Angel