Black Poetry : wife-to-be....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, May 16, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    [COLOR=royal blue]this is our book... sealed
    and only God has the key
    ...and l am you
    and you are me - we are one.
    my love is true- infinite as the sky
    orange moon and sun
    yes
    you were my girl
    now you are my world
    my axis.. l spin :spin: have a toast with a friend :toast:
    l grin :D
    l will trash my pen now, for poetry is before me..
    l celebrate you. why?
    you have given my eyes guidance in the night
    you were God's light in my times of sorrow
    l love you yesterday
    today
    and tomorrow my queen
    love is now experienced not heard or seen
    nothing or noone shall come between you and l
    for l give us protection
    via God's ear and His eye
    to have and hold us
    shape and mold us
    l just sold us into his care...
    at your presence the angels have to stare
    for your glare is that of heaven
    l am day seven- you fulfill me
    it may sound silly but l am the real me when l am around you...
    l would say l found you
    but
    a treasure like you no man can find, but only the wisdom of Him are you brought to me
    and l am ever- grateful that he thought of me this way
    l declare you with praise to be my wife
    my life my eternity this day. [/COLOR]
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your WIFE TO BE is everything a poem should be!
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    beautiful scribe j'hiah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis one was so lovely and warm
    make me wanna get married
    this was all love

    tyte scribe of da pen
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this was beautifull...


    yeah me to...........
    bless you two...
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ABSOULUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice!
    Peace to ya!
     
  8. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! That was more than any words can describe!!
    Real love in it's purest form...
    Appreciated this 1...
     
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