Quiet Poetry Lounge : WICKED DISEASE

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart is heavy laced with sadness grief and anger
    Cancer strikes like a thief in the night

    Taking all my love ones away leaving me asking WHY???
    WHY…are you preying on my family?

    Taking them out like 1 2 3
    one day they’re here and the next day they’re gone
    And I mourn….and mourn….

    Crying my eyes out not understanding
    your rhyme or your reason for lurking
    around like its hunting season

    Inflicting so much pain causing so much
    hurt most of the time with no alert of your arrival

    I know I should not hate
    But hate is what I feel towards you

    Because continuously you prey
    On the ones I love

    Making them suffer just because
    you choose to

    Feeling helpless, defensely, no way to fight you, stop your
    Reckless path of rage and furry your seek

    It doesn’t matter what part of the body
    you chosoe to lurk and creep

    The end result is always the same
    TERMINAL……

    A point of no return for someone
    I dearly love

    Yesterday you took my Auntie Irene from me
    And less than 6 months ago you took my Auntie V

    I’m angry mad pissed off as I can be
    Because I do not understand WHY…..

    I know the Lord will not put more on me than I can bare
    And today I ask him please, for the strength to

    Get me through the next day the next week the next month
    the next year without having to lean over another hospital bed
    and watch another person I love wither to shreds

    I ask him please to not let me have to shed another tear
    or have to put on my black dress and look down
    at another person I love lay so still
    inside a box that will be dropped 6 feet under the ground
    or stare at an urn full of ashes from flesh that has been burned

    Yes… I am angry mad pissed off as I can be
    our government needs to stop spending our tax dollars
    on senseless wars prostitutes and whores

    and find a cure for this Wicked Disease
    CANCER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Passionate poem and yes that disease is wicked, but always remember there's a name above all names here on Earth and He took care of all diseases 2000 years ago because He knew what we'd go through today. Believe, recieve, and speak healing in the name of Jesus, our doctor.
     
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    I am so sorry to read of your loss. I know what it is to lose a loved one to cancer. Losing loved ones is never easy, and you will find peace in time. A cure for cancer can't be found soon enough, so true, so true...
     
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    heartfelt deeply .......this wicked thing that comes unannounced and captures
    souls i too long to know why sadly to hear of so that has enter your family ...
     
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    BLESS Sister
    A Wicked Disease it is
    This one of the worst so many do suffer
    There will be something better
    I know it will
    My heart goes out to you
    Making it can be the terror
    But you will sis
    GOD BLESS
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are only here for awhile,
    as none of us are put here to stay.
    just know that you're not alone here,
    for we all will kneel with you and pray.​
     
  7. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    with u

    feel ur pain
    ur in my thoughts today and everyday...

    stay up!!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel you

    the universe is sometimes hard to understand

    but i do know it's not based on emotion

    my mom died like that

    and my best friend's wife is dying right now

    on a respirator that they are going to pull

    i feel your pain

    good people go thru some of the worst stuff i've ever seen

    still trying to figure that one out
     
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