Black Poetry : Why'd you decide 2 go?.............S.A.L.

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    S.A.L.
    Salvation After Life
    they-put you to dwell
    it must've been real
    it must've been trife........

    I'm rememberin' your smile
    I'm rememberin' your face
    its already been a while
    since God opened tha gates....

    I pour this from the heart
    you were a friend to tha end
    never fought -never starved
    2gether we were fed....

    and 2gether we would lend
    a little here a little there
    it was hard at the funeral
    seemed like some didn't care

    cuz son wasn't right in tha mind
    I let 'em think that...
    but they was lucky i didn't spaz
    with tha metal,in fact...
    i remember when we had beef
    you stood in tha front..with that...
    ready to give it to these kidz
    but no more handlin' biz....

    you're gone
    and i couldn't remember tha last time i cried....
    so when i saw you in that pine box
    tears fell from my eyes....

    Then to top it all off i got tha thought of suicide....
    and why did you decide....
    why did you decide?????

    my homie aint here no more
    for us to ride.....
    i just hope that your alright
    in heaven with Jesus Christ..........

    cause theres always gonna be.......

    Salvation After Life

    R.I.P.
    Sal Depaz
    Nov. 8, 1982- May 28, 2003
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful and i feel you totally...i've lost so many people that were close to me and who i cared about so deeply...it's a struggle every day to keep from crying because of the lost...but in time we will feel better...we won't heal completely but we will feel better. much respect.
     
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    this was beautiful...
    sorry for your lost...
    i can feel your pain..
    for i had a freind once...
    that lives no more
    on dis earth...
    i miss her so...
    the pain is there...
    but it also makes me
    stronger...
    it will pass and heal
    buy never forget....
    always there....
     
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    man lurk
    i was just think'n bout my boy this morn'n
    that died back in 91....James Mix r.i.p.
    i felt this son...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome and very well felt
    simply beautiful and u pose'd it to perfection
    feel u on dis.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, i really really like this
     
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    thanx yall for tha support.....
    tha way i felt...tha way i feel....ahhhh
    its just 2 much 2 say......
    but this is about my boy who just when we got real close,he decided to take his own life....to this day i don't know why...but i do know that there is always gonna be S.A.L.

    NO DOUBT 'BOUT THAT....


    thanx to everybody for checkin this......it truly is from my heart...
     
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    indeed .....brutha i felt ya heart rumbling
     
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