Black Poetry : WHY!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 14, 2001.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIDN'T U FEEL MY LOVE
    CAN'T U SEE MY DEVOTION
    CAN'T U SEE IN MY MOTIONS
    MY EMBRACE WAS MY EMOTIONS
    I LOVED U DEARLY
    LOVE IS HARD TO EXPLAIN
    IT GIVE U PLEASURE YET'
    GIVES U GREAT PAIN

    DIDN'T U KNOW MY CARES
    FEEL MY CARESSES
    DIDN'T I TOUCH YA HEART
    WITH LOVE I VOW TO BRING
    U MANY SMILES
    WHY!
    U SHOULD HAVE TOLD ME THE TRUTH
    NOW I HAVE PROOF OF WHISPERS
    U BE IN THE ROOM OF MANY
    U FORGOT THE BOND WE POSED
    IS IT NOT THE PROMISE U GAVE
    BROKEN IN A VISION OF WHOMEVER
    WHY! I ASK
    SEE WHAT I DO ITS OF U
    WHEN I THINK ITS U I THINK OF
    ONLY U GAVE ME FEELINGS OF DIFFERENT KINDS
    U WAS THE ONE THAT MADE MY WORLD SPIN
    YO LOVE WAS WHAT I HOPE TOO WIN
    MY LOVE RAN LONG STRONG AND DEEP
    MY HEART WAS GIVEN UPON U,FOR U,AS U
    YET U TURN AWAY LIKE A BUNT OFFERING
    IF THROWN AWAY U WILL SURELY KILL
    SLOWLY DAY BY DAY
    U GAVE IN LIKE A BREEZE OF NIGHT AIR
    WITHOUT THOUGHT U FORGOT ME 4 THAT MOMENT
    THOSE SECONDS WITHIN DA HOUR I WAS UNSPOKEN OF
    NOW U STAND HERE IN TEARS BUT MY SOUL IS ALL
    WET AND FULL
    EVERYTHING IN MY WORLD IS COLD AND GRAY
    AS U LAY IN THOUGHTS OF WHAT I AM AND TO BE
    IF U COULD HAVE ONLY LOVED ME AS I OF THEE
    WHAT OUR LIVES COULD BE .......WELL ITS A
    DREAM OF NONE TRUTH IN MEMORIES .........U R
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$...

    WOW!... i felt the passion in your words!
    this was wonderfully expressed!...

    thanks for sharing...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUNSHYNE I KNEW IT WAS A BRIGHT SPOT
    IN MY GLOOMY DAY AS NOW I SEE IN YO RAYS
    THANX BABY...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    CINDY

    WHATS 4 ME IS JUST 4 ME
    AS THE DAYS PAST I'LL
    SOON SEE.....IN FLIGHT TONIGHT
    I THANX THEE MY SWEET....BLESS U
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Your $$RICH$$NESS

    glad you shared this flow
    giving me a chance
    to let you know
    that she has lost
    a most wonderful beau

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES INDEED ONE LOST A GIFT OF LOVE
    BY GOD'S HOLY HAND NOW I STAND WITH
    PURE FAITH AND YET NOT WONDER WHOM
    NOR WHEN BUT CONTINUE IN THE PATH
    OF LIFE......THANX DESTEE..
     
  7. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt yo love
    i know ya heart
    yo emotions of devotion
    is my notions of love
    ask me and i tell no lie!

    Rich i see sadness side of u
    whats wrong!?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R SO BEAUTIFUL HONEY
    MY MIND JUST OFF IN A MAZE
    I THANX YA FOR YA LOVE IN HEART
     
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    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    MAN IM REALLY FEELING ON THIS ONE. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANX MY BRUTHA !
    GLAD YA FEEL ME
    THANX 4 DA READ