Black Poetry : Why

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder why I keep meeting women who saw things they don’t mean
    they say they want a man to not be about sex only, who will hold and listen to them
    I tell them all the same thing...that’s me, because it IS me
    so why...do a lot of my first dates end in sex?
    I try to be the one to not initiate it...Okay, sometimes I do!
    But usually when I’m perfectly willing to relax and enjoy their company,
    they can’t stick to their word
    I’m not a player...so it cant be my level of game
    I’m not really that cute, so what is it..I cant explain
    it seems not many females can visualize the heights im trying to attain
    and when the night is over....why am I the one ashamed?
    I love sex....but I love closeness even more
    it’s hard for a man who gets sex on the first try...
    to look at a woman the same
    a REAL man that is

    Why am I such a good friend, when I don’t feel I have any real friends
    people will backstab, gossip and lie to seemingly no end
    can’t we put the facades away and be real to each other?
    And embrace one another as almost sisters and brothers
    It feels so good to open up and confide in someone who cares about you
    but I’ll never do it again, because you never know if the caring
    is just a well woven web of deceit
    im torn between being a icon of difference or becoming a typical male
    I used to walk the fence between them, but somewhere I think I fell,
    and split in two and have a half on each side of it
    but I don’t like one side so I’ll try and rise above it



    Derrick H.
     
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    OH, can i have ur phone number????:toast:
    i'll chat with u into a deep slumber
    get into ur mind before ur pants
    wait patiently for our major dance....
     
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    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...very clever more...
    if you offer what your name says...more
    thats oppurtunity knocking, ill kick open the door
    i cant dance but ill borrow some rhthym from you
    and stay by your side, no matter what we may go through

    thank you more
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the deep emotions that went into creating this piece
    There are women who sincerely desire those things you speak of
    with faith, time and patience we discover what we seek...
    I commend the honest male perspective of this piece
    thank you for sharing.

    souldeep!
    Coco
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    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx coco..thats the only reason i wont give up...i know they're out there...