Black Poetry : Why won't YOU understand? (inspired by thepoetsean)

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so funny that you speak of another
    while my poor heart is weighted under
    the need for your affection
    and the crave for your touch
    I hurt
    in places I have never used before
    while u strain for the love and attention
    for the pain and devotion
    of the one you call lover
    the very same that warmed your cover
    now clouds your vision

    I've been waiting for a while and a day
    and I'm still here today
    why can't you understand...
    I want to keep you
    I want to see you
    I want to be you
    at least can I try
    to love you?

    She'll never understand
    cuz I can
    there is one comprehension to every dilema
    and I am...

    I hurt

    I don't know what else to say...
    I am at a loss for words...AGAIN...
    cuz I am deeply involved in
    deeply ensconced in
    thoroughly wrapped
    buried
    and devoured in
    the art of wanting you

    why won't YOU understand?

    :confused:
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I totally agree with this poem. I'm feelin it 100%. Keep flowin dream:)

    AM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa!!! feeling dis here within .........let da ink drop
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scribed with conviction!

    hard to believe that lil' ole me inspiah'ed dat deah!

    beautiful piece.

    sean.revisited.
     
  5. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I'm just sayin

    Hey thanx y'all for the love. Sean yeh you did inspire that. I know how it feels to be m!sunderztood, or just never known at all


    I'm just sayin...
    :eek:
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is strong and excellent peace continue my sister in spirit.
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now....

    now that was live.....

    nice work hun!!
    feeling it!!


    **speeding through hyperspace**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
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