Black Poetry : Why We Never Kissed

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blank stares, filled with so much,
    your eyes lost in mine
    my mind, lose in thoughts of
    deep exploring
    ignoring the consequences
    and deciding to dive right in
    taking you on
    into erogenous zones
    feeding a flame that burned within…
    I longed to touch you, taste you, feel you, hold you
    and by the conflicted look of lust in your eyes
    I know you envisioned the same

    me and you, legs bare and interlocked
    flesh writhing, tongues rolling
    the intensity and shock in knowing
    we both wanted
    to submerge ourselves
    in the sensual waters of the other’s domain
    how you longed to feel my fingers playfully trace your spine
    and me, to hear you ecstatically moaning my name

    mere minutes seemed like a lifetime
    as I looked into your eyes
    your arms wrapped, trembling around my waist,
    my hands slowly sliding up your thighs,
    who knows exactly what may have been
    if we’d gave in and kissed
    but he loved you so much
    and it would have killed him
    losing you to his best friend

    so….we pulled away
     
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    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice........

    That was nice. I got caught up in the moment, I had visuals for a minute, lol. Good job.
     
  3. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot....I appreciate the response....much love

    keep scribin'

    MJ

    (by the way.....I'm --> :D about them visuals....lol)
     
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    oh yeah! :D
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****.

    besides the obvious cause of my initial reaction...lol...this reads beautifully!
     
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    tight flow.....much love..... :)
     
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    nice as it this is, those are dangerous grounds to be steppin on...watch out now....nice flow tho.....
     
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    loved it........you r a good friend. some other would'nt have cared.
     
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    I like this in as much it happens more times than not do to the trust of friends with our lovers. very nice... Christopher's Place :toast:
     
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    when the east is in the house
    oh my god danger...
    nice piece...i've been there...you did the right thing
    peace
    khasm
     
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