Black Poetry : Why U Wanna Hold Ur Breath?

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay yall gonna have to read "just exhale" n then "exhalin" 1st, but here ya go SwtT, I told ya Id get back at it.(smile)

    Look Babygirl...
    im not even gonna try and front 4 you cuz ive had my share dirt
    but i too have been played and been put through the works
    i see the potential in you and i see the potential in me
    i see that you're not after my credentials, you're just after me
    I know I spit flows, but I dont spit lines
    I'm not into playing the game anymore, its been done too many times

    I told you to exhale... but you just wanna hold your breath...

    I know its been awhile for you cuz its been awhile for me
    I stopped living in the fast life, it got too wild for me
    I dont know what you've been thru, I probably can't even begin to imagine
    But I promise my intentions are good and my words will turn into actions
    You can't base everything upon the last dance
    The greatest thing about love is the risk of taking a chance

    I told you to exhale... but you just wanna hold your breath

    Im no where near perfect, but I am better than that last *****
    And you ask how do I figga?
    Cuz he obviously wasn't worth much, cuz ur not with him now
    And I know how to make a good women like you stick around
    And since you're demanding to ride than you can sit in the passenger seat
    Whatever you want you can have as long as its in my reach

    Girl just relax, Im telling you to exhale... and you're steadily holding your breath

    And of course I wanna make your toes curl and make your back arch
    I wanna do whateva i can to make the room hot and the flame spark
    But Im not rushing, naw... I'm willing to take it slow
    I just want to hold you in my arms and after that we'll grow
    You dont have to give it up to me quickly, if I wanted that I could go down the street
    And you wouldn't have to worry about letters, cuz you'd wake up to my heartbeat

    come on baby relax and exhale... stop holding your breath...

    And Im gonna show you, so go on ahead doubt me
    You'll see life isnt worth living if its without me
    Im gonna tell you, prove it to you, and continue to portray it
    There will be some bad days, some really bad days, but we'll make it
    I got the ambition and heart while you got the strength and power
    And build our fortress thats strong as bricks and tall as towers

    sit back, relax, and just exhale...
    Why you wanna hold your breath...?

    When you're almost out of air...(smile)
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooooooooowwwwwww!!! That boy's on fire!!!
    That was tight as heck!!!!!
    I got you on that follow up baby boy cuz that was decennnnnnntttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    lol thanx, but just ta let u know ima girl, i just write from every perspective
     
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    u posting heat ....i love dis flow
    keep droppin it like dat sistah
     
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    oops. you write lik you a dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    lol i write from every possible aspect, ill write about women, ill write about men, ill write bout love, ill write bout pain, anything u name it.
     
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    mad tyte flow!
     
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    lol! i liked this! is deep and funny too! tyte!
     
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