Black Poetry : Why U Can't See Me !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 31, 2001.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FOR WHO I AM
    I'VE BEEN SO MANY PLACES
    IN MY LIFE
    SAW TOO MANY FACES
    PEOPLE WATCHING ME
    I'VE ACTED OUT MY LIFE
    ON STAGE SPEAKING WORDS
    OF LOVE TOO U
    SO THE PROBLEM IS
    FOR MANY YEARS
    I GAVE MYSELF
    NOW I HAVE LITTLE LEFT
    YET I SEARCH FOR MY TRUE LOVE
    EVERY TYME I MEET SOM' ONE I LIKE
    GOTTA WORRY BOUT
    IS IT CASH $$ THEY SEE WHEN THEY LOOK
    AT ME LOOKING FOR THAT RIDE THAT'S FREE
    SO I MADE A VOW TO BE GOOD 2 WHOM GOOD 2 ME
    COZ MY LOVE IS FREE INSIDE ME
    BABY
    YET I SING MY SONG TO U
    WIT LOVE AND DEVOTION
    MADD RESPECT AND AFFECTION
    COMPASSION AND PERFECTION
    TO GUIDE YO DAILY DIRECTION
    BY NIGHT
    I'LL TAKE U IN FLIGHT TO CARESS U RIGHT
    KEEP U IN WARMTH FROM MONTH 2 MONTH
    STILL I CRY OUT 2 U
    WIT NO TEARS NOR WORDS JUST HEART
    BODY AND SOUL
    SO WHY U CAN SEE ME AS ME
    WHY U LIE AND CRY AFTER I SHOWER U
    WHY U CAN JUST LOVE ME AS I OF U
    AND BE LOVED ..............WHY!?
    I NEED U
    I WANT U
    I MISS U
    I FEEL U
    I TASTE U
    I TRUST U
    I HONOR U
    WHY U CAN'T SEE ME INSIDE
    THE PURE :heart: OF ME
    THE PURE :love: OF ME
    HUMMMMMM!!
    WELL I'LL JUST MAKE A :toast:
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my heart pours out....

    in :heart: :heart: :heart: and compassion....keep believing in love your PERFECT MATCH :angel1: will give back what she gets!
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she'll see you, but only if she is the right one
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you do is worth all you do. Keep on doing it. Nice Richness.

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANKS FAMILY

    I JUST TRY TO BE LITTLE OLE ME!;)
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $R...revisited...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH-NE$$.


    ...how'd i miss this?!!!
    (i guess GQ is good for sumthin'!! :lol: )

    this piece speaks volumes!! & i'm
    listenin' close-ly! i love-did it!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetly $Rich$

    You know.....sometimes you can treat people
    too nice it ruins them. If you know what I mean?....

    I believe you'll find the right woman
    who was taught how to love/treat a man
    Especially one as nice & sweet as you. :)
    Nice flow.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,

    i'll be on the lookout for $$RICHESS$$ aight?!
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, Rich, Rich!

    Got to give it up--this one had me thinking and turning my mind--well done--Amun-Ra


    :)
     
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