Black Poetry : Why oh why

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is it left to do?
    Still thinking of you
    Can’t sleep missing you
    It hurts deeper in the depths of my soul
    As my heart pours over
    Why
    Why oh why
    Sitting here talking to myself
    Trying to understand why
    Why
    Why oh why
    Your not here I feel worthless
    The sky is always black
    Moving around without feelings
    Why
    Why oh why
    Love me the way you did
    To hurt me so hard
    Lost in my world once more
    Trying to be
    But
    …………..Baby
    It’s harder everyday
    Without you….
    Why
    Why oh why
    My mind is going crazy my soul
    Is spinning…
    My thoughts are visions of
    ….of
    You
    I
    Us as we
    All I can do is cry for you
    You took me on a ride
    Played with my emotions
    And then
    …………Then you turned your back on me
    Now I know it was never meant
    For the love was not real
    …………At lease not for you
    Why
    Why oh why
    Wanting to feel your touch
    Daydreaming of your voice
    Wishing you would call
    And say
    …………but
    the phone don’t ring anymore
    You were everything I knew
    Now
    …Now what do I do
    Why
    Why oh why
    It’s no more of you and I
    All I can do is sit and cry
    ….sit and talk to myself
    Wishing you was here
    Why
    Why oh why
    Did you take me this far
    ……to let me down
    Like this…
    Why
    Why oh why
    Why
    Oh………..
    Why oh why

    (C)2005
    Blue Visions Book 2
    ANTHOLOGY
    of One Woman’s Heart

    By An Angel



    Some questions will never be answered.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There will come a day,
    ...when my "Why's"
    ...will turn to "bye's"
    yes love, the day will surely come...
    when it will be...
    ummmm...
    Hey baby, is that a teardrop in your eye?
    I guess the tables turn...
    and now it's
    ~your turn to cry~​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep yet felt whewwwwwwww all i can say !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QT...Amen to that thanks for the love and added flow

    Rich....I do understand thanks for the love and support...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    welcome dear it was one heavy well said piece
     
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    I felt your every word and I sometimes no often think the same why oh why.
    Nicely poised piece
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sistah BLKANGEL......It's been a while since I laid eyes on your wordz. However Sistah truth be told- I am constantly connected to the inspirations I have gotten from your past scribes. I guess you could say that through your heartfelt, and sometimes painful portrayals of self, expectations and experiences....I have learned to be a better Brotha Man.

    Thank you and One Love
    You are truly blessed
     
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    errthang happens 4 a reason...
    heartfelt peace poet...fa sho

    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for such kind words my brother your blessed your reply have touched me...thank you for all your loving support and love here at destee.com...so nice to see you i was wondering where you went glad your home!!!!!
    Peace
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    thank you for the love on dis scribe....sometimes we never get the answers but always make us stronger we see signs before they come to damage our pride and heart

    Peace
    Angel