Black Poetry : why me !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 26, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside the story
    lay one heart
    outside da heart
    be one man
    one man
    stand alone

    but the story
    keep moving on
    roll of the dice
    twice as fast
    will this mix
    come to pass

    da mind in a twist
    cross matching
    da path
    within the love
    we no longer hug
    now just me
    here on da rug

    dis book of so much
    mix emotions
    bitter taste
    is the case
    one now face
    tracing back da tears
    and the upcomming fears
    from the chapter before

    it's a struggle 2 read
    any more
    so da book lay open
    wide on the floor
    on page ten

    i try to flip da script
    i gave it my all
    yet i seem to fall
    just a bit short
    i write da open
    verse that strike
    as an killing curse
    but where i reside
    leave emptyness
    inside
    my soul captured
    like chain down
    da mental of mind
    wares a frown
    again i stop and wait

    is dis da breaking
    of my plate ...???
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was truly a deep thought poet
    thanks for sharing
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Shaz .......... my deep thoughts has took ova
    da mind which i think with coz it ain't easy no mo!
    headed in a path of lost ventures .....deeper then one know!
    Thankz 4 da read & feelin my mental
     
  4. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel the unrest...
    keep scribin
    -7:spinstar:
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we are

    here for you and you know this is real.....




    One
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep writing it out bruh... it helps a lil'

    Reas
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is so much strength in these words. Strength that will move your soul to a calmer place. Beautifully written Poet.

    BE
     
  9. campbell

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    who are u ????? i would just love to read more, more, and more of your poetry ..... u speak to me of me .....
     
  10. INcogniTO

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    Very deep scribe poet!!

    I feel the struggle...sometimes writing it out shows a glimpse of what has a hold of us...thank you for sharing your picture...Much love Poet!