Black Poetry : WHY ME

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  1. witerboy

    witerboy New Member MEMBER

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    why it have to be me

    the world i live in the sick world

    i want to die in my blood

    i feel i like i want to drown in deep part of the sea

    when i just in the coner of in the deep darkness and i want to see the light but i cant

    i the thing i go thour and pain the surffing

    when i sit the coner sobing in pain

    why why why me but why was i go my self in two
    :confused: :cry: undefined
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel every tear that fall
    sometime we are choosen to be the one to carry the load
    but also be the one who show da world how mending and faith works.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The ache in this was excruciating. Sometimes we have to slow our thought processes down to be able to deal with why. And sometimes there is no concrete answer, but we have to survive anyway, keeping our faith close. Emotive write.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    this world is full of pain but we must press on :peace:
     
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    a great piece