Black Poetry : Why Me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was so happy....until today...looks like me and "love" don't get along

    I got a nice shaped body that I keep toned,
    But it's obviously not enough to keep him calling from home.
    Becasue today it happened to me once more and again
    I found betrayal in the arms of a "friend"
    That same mother****** that said he didn't want to commit....
    I found him publicly kissing another girl's lips
    I saw it with my own eyes and I thought he saw,
    the love in my eyes go away, my heart I heard fall.
    My gates from many months ago came back up strong
    In the back of my mind, I knew we wouldn't last long
    But I blame myself more, for letting this **** happen
    Spreading my legs, hoping for a relationship to happen?
    That **** is unheard of and makes me look like a h0e
    Right now, I admit.. I think I deserve it though
    If I looked at myself in a mirror, I would see a **** fool
    Cuz this ***** tried and played me in this [email protected] high school

    Fam: shakes head: I never learn do I?
    Rich sorry about the cussin...gotta get this off my chest
     
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    my little sister
    i read your flow
    i feel where you
    are coming from
    develop you
    finish high school
    take care of you
    take care of what is needed
    to strengthen you
    only a King will know a Queen
    so be the Queen you are
    and one day you will see
    love is beautiful in many ways
    just wait for a while...Be patience
    and you will see
    do not be your own enemy:fight:
    meaning..stop putting
    yourself down..OK :)
    enjoy your youth peaceful
    much love to you sister SWt
    Peace
     
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    first...I don't believe in love anymore
    because love does not believe in me...baby girl..love yourself....
    love always live in you regardless of anything....

    second....the flow was nice...
    i feel where you are coming from..
    but keep your head up...
    his lost not yours...
    in time this all will pass...
    i know i been there so many times..
    and felt as you do now...
    an came to realize that love
    me was the best thing i could do...
    as Sister Bluewater say...Be patience
    love will find you from another....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey......i feel ya emotion the deep of pain
    but all love just not the same
    hold ya faith look to the sky
    feel my warmth of love touch ya heart
    what he did and made u feel
    was the work of a devil thrill
    cap side the myth of his move
    his lost the brother loose

    love as u are and did
    a new king awaits ya heart
    to give u respect and love
    remember these wordz from
    above the man of love

    deep within u will mend
    from the touch of a friend
    it's o'k to vent let it out
    don't keep it in
    i feel u within my space
    so i come to comfort ya heart
    it will be alright
    he 's a cheat not complete
    a true one is coming
    your unique and sweet
    don't let it ware u down
    just turn it all around
    continue to love coz love
    is the greatest gift of ya soul
    i feel u deeply
    take flyte and release .....
    express ya emotions.......
     
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    you know, SwtT, when girls are young, there is a tendency to take on all the blame for things. I hope you can know that this is his problem and not yours (even though he's making it yours). You are a wonderful, intelligent, sweet, compassionate, loving young woman. If he can't see that, then it's his [email protected] loss. It always helps me to remember in times like these that the other person's faults don't effect me. Much love to you.
     
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    all of the above little sister...

    keep your head up...
    we all live and learn in love
    the pain will subside...
    and the right one will come along...
    rest assure…
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bluewater,RichMsBll, Gempis, and angelicsage... it's just that i feel so bad and I haven't felt like this since March..I keep thinking why does all of this happen to me?....I...i need to just just sit back and think for a minture to myself....:grouphug: thank you fam I :heart: you all
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

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    GIRL!
    i know it hurts....trust me i KNOW.....but when the time comes love will find you on its own....i had to learn that the hard way......when u love yourself and focus on straighting out your life....God sends you true love when you LEAST expect it.....and don't pass it by....i passed it by at first....but i was blessed that it came back.....that doesn't happen with everybody...

    heart felt flow big sis...
     
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    Thank you LovelyG I'll keep that in my mind:)
     
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    Don't ever give up on Love

    Love may turn on you, and it may even let you down, through trials and tribulations, love may not stand on solid ground. Love can some times not be as dependable as you'd like it to be, open your eyes and see, dependability and this security, is really some type made up fantasy. But still to live without luv is not to live at all, so what if you fall....crawl then kneel, then stand right back up...Let the strong woman in you step up to the forefront. So be strong baby gurl....hell do you....Remember God will never put you threw something he doesn’t feel you can get threw....

    Jelani Dalmar
    aka Soulful Soldier

    written just for you baby gurl :roll: