Black Poetry : Why Me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I been the one down from the start
    Never had to ask twice, everything I did came from the :heart:
    The only 1 there in yo hardest times
    The MVP on your team in your life of crime
    Down enough to put up yo bail
    As I recall, no 1 cared that you were rotting in jail

    Lately I'm last on your list of things to do
    Now I'm wondering why the hell I stayed so tru
    Once again in your time of need where do you run?
    Back to where the real love is, you know I'm the 1
    But I'm tired of always coming in dead last
    Keep it real with me, am I your future or past
    Holding on so tight
    Waiting for the moment to be right
    Sometimes I cry at night
    Not knowing if you're all right
    I wish I could take away all your pain
    Be you got yourself stuck in this rain
    All I can do is be there when times get tough
    Pray night and day that one day my love will be enough!

    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was so deep and touching, feeling this tremendously!
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you angelicsage
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A STRONG WOMAN...standing by her man.

    "Alize'(Every Thug's Passion)" ... think about that...then relate it to your flow...along with the definition of a Thug.

    hmmm...just playing.:)
     
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    man.. i know this feeling too. but then i had to just walk away and let that person decide what they really want, even tho it hurt. but nice flow... feelin u all the way.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was heartfelt, I admire your strength, not everybody is willing to go the extra mile for there men or women..... I think no matter where the realtionship works or not you should always give 110 percent.... (smile)
    Great piece thanks for sharing your heart.....

    AqueenPassing

    :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
    the heart of a Queen
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alizentang sista..... feeling

    you defenatly....

    come here let give me you a sister huge..one for you and one for
    the deep poem :love:

    much love libertylaida
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautifully deep....great piece...
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all the loving comments! It's so great to get such loving feedback from those whom I admired from afar for a long time. Once again thanks for the loving welcome!!!!!!!