Black Poetry : Why is this?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 25, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When i,m there ..
    they flirt talk spend time with
    other woman ...
    except for me..
    Somethimes there attantion goes to other
    things ..
    except for me
    they dont realy care...
    sumthimes i,m even air..

    the moment i leave ..
    they hate me
    curs point fingers at me
    say you didnt care about me
    they creak..

    Sometimes i wait weeks for the phone..
    and they dont give me the oppertunaty their number for me to call...
    Than when i,m carefull and wach out and paitent..
    that think i play to let the man beg...
    If i know who is infront of me...
    and i realy like the person ...
    i would never do that..



    I live in the moment
    trassure the one i have
    always did that...
    like now
    there might be no tommorow..

    When i talk at this momant
    i say what i feel and i feel
    what i say..
    it has always been that way..

    do i change as a person ..
    maybe yes..
    but a part of you will always be...
    i guess..
    only some expreciances can change how you feel

    so i,m sitting here wondering...thinking
    about the love between man and woman
    i have not found the defenition the meaning about ..
    the love relationschips i,ve had.
    not yet..
    that it is a feeling a motion....
    and much more that is a fact..

    but why is this...
    the momant i leave ...
    they love me?


    or hate me...



    mmm..




    than where was the love..?
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STAY

    Don't go away mad... stay here, reading and writing poetry-

    1poetsought

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one so loveth u
    but to fact the real u
    seem so affraid
    stay here inside dis whole thing
    coz i feel da vibe u bring !
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.....bro,s..
     
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    it is strange, it is not until a summer day is gone that it is missed...very nice...live each day tresuring the moments
    Peace
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poetsought &bleu and rich to :heart:


    Yes rich and know some guys and woman can not separate ...
    the love ......gods love towards a brother or sister ...
    i mean its heart for me to at times to separate that..

    or love like in love like the love between a woman and a man
    you know the loverelationship

    and i believe also that people fear what they dont know...




    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem lady...i likes it...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    It seems that it often when someone or something is a memory
    it is most appreciated.
    The sadest part is that in not appreciating and getting to know
    some one they miss out on all the blessings that person can shower on them.
    becasue God places people and situations in our lives for that reason.
    I liked this piece sorry if Ijumped up on the soap box for a moment.
    Stepping down now.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All you can be is who you are. Sometimes misunderstood, sometimes misunderstanding. It all gets so confusing sometimes, but go with your gut and live your life. It will become clear one day.
     
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    Very nice way to put your emotions!!! I like the flow sista!!!!
    oh yea, I Got Your Back!!!!!
    Much love to you!!!!!!