Black Poetry : why is it different?

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  1. dImondStudz

    dImondStudz New Member MEMBER

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    i have never felt more secure,
    more fit,
    then these last couple weeks with u
    till it hit,
    the lie of all lies
    the lie i told intended not to hurt u
    but instead hurt u more
    not because of what i lied about
    not because of what u think i did
    but because i lost ur trust
    the key to our love
    now i ask myself is it possible?
    possible to prove to u again...
    u can TRUST me!
    it has to be
    for me
    i cant lose u over this
    i cant just walk away
    i cant let u go.
    Where theres a will
    there is a way
    and i will find this way
    we argue and fight
    but only cuz the lost sights
    u cant c urself with me NE more
    and i can c us, but i kno its gone
    i want nothin more then to bring it back
    and keep it that.
    u ask whats so different...
    i promised not to lie again last time
    i lied...
    i promise not to lie this time
    u ask.. am i lying?
    but whats so different
    then i just wanted to keep u
    i wanted to be with u
    i couldn't let u go
    i found love 4 the first time
    now it's different
    now we've been beyond love
    i know everything now
    i kno i ****** up
    i kno i lied
    but i kno i neva had u like i did
    i kno i neva felt like i did
    we neva broke loose
    we neva spit tru feelings
    we kept it all n
    we neva knew how the otha felt
    instead we thru petty fits
    but it's no excuse
    i knew u loved me
    but i was blinded by insecurities
    i neva cheated
    neva thought about it
    just was out kickin it
    cuz i neva just asked u 2 stay longer
    neva asked y u had to go home
    i just assumed...
    and u ask...
    whats so different
    maybe it was the nights
    maybe the days
    maybe wakin up 2 u
    maybe sharin everything with u
    maybe it was everything
    **** maybe, it was
    sleeping next to u
    a blessing on its own
    waking up to ur smile
    heaven at my doorstep
    sharing every moment with u
    god even knows it was right
    now...
    i cry every nite
    if i could i'd neva go to sleep
    everynite it's the same dream
    us...
    n love, how we were
    even more then we were
    i don't want to wake up eitha
    cuz i come bak to reality
    again im mad
    u used to at least come in the room soon as u woke
    now i c u wheneva u get around 2 it
    u used to stay up long as u could 2 b with me
    now u just go 2 sleep when ur tired
    u even slept with me
    we made our own bed
    now i dont even wanna sleep n a bed
    i dont kno what i've done
    i kno u gotta b hurt
    cuz im **** near dying
    u ask y it's so different
    because i knew how u always felt
    but i didn't KNOW
    why is it so different?
     
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    VERY NICELY POSE'D well felt happy u here to share
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    see you asking lots of questions in this flow
    see you declaring love and trying to grow
    feel you wanting to get pass tight
    and i hope all works out alright..
    thanks for sharing
     
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    So many reasons to lie, seems logical at the time, and then you have to cover that one up with another one and so on. I was into your flow, so many reasons why human nature is as it is.
     
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    i liked this one i gone thru a simliar experience so i feel where you coming from.
     
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    welcome to destee.com
    great release..felt all this flow head on
    be looking to read more from you


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    Peace
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  7. Andreattah

    Andreattah Active Member MEMBER

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    Tight flow...please don't ever stop that pen from writing
     
  8. angelicsage

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    Welcome Poet... :wave:

    This piece was gripping...
    and poignant with pain
    and emotion...
    Love is always so complicated...
    This piece was very moving...

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    Again...this was a wonderful flow!
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

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    I feel your pain, poet. Keep using your pen as your therapy. It works. Welcome home. There is plenty of love here to sustain you. Peace and blessings.
     
  10. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece....


    ****Monad.poetress
     
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