Black Poetry : why im blu

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i used to hate u because made me hurt so bad
    made me cry blood tears into my pillow,
    without one single thought and then would
    go along with ur day as if nothing even happen
    which in ur mindz it was as insignificent and small
    as my esteem was at the time.

    i used to think that u all were
    the most horrible people
    that i knew
    keywords:USED TO THINK

    yeah thats right,
    i forgive u
    and guess what......

    I DONT GIVE A F*** ANYMORE

    :D YEAH THAT RIGHT I DONT GIVE A F***
    ANYMORE!!!:eek:

    u had me down,
    but then i relized
    u were worse off then i was!!!!



    u would smoke weed
    thinkin that was kool,
    pleazzzzz
    its posion in ur system

    havin sex,
    HAVE U NOT HEARD OF AIDS AND HIV
    geezzzz

    skipin class,
    only hurting yourself!!!
    u people are not even passing!!!

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
    so why sould i be worried about what u do?!?
    u are dyin ya **** self,

    i wrote this to u because im sick of being angry
    and depressed, and yes
    i have recovered my lyfe with God.

    so this is a letter to all those that used to critisize
    all those that called me ugly,fat,everything.
    just wanted to say i forgive all.

    peace,
    -story

    :eek: this is from ya forgiving poetic GODDESS :D
    HOLLA
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wright this to all those who hurt me at emerson or anywhere else, so pent up was my resentmant and anger towards them,
    felt as if i was going to explode.

    but im tired of being angry and depressed so i went and wrote this.i forgive them for what theyve done. cause om tired of being tired.

    much lov,
    -story
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Thats right Gurl! let go and let GOD! I like I like!
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks purple, just couldnt hold the burden anymore ya feel me?
     
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    Oh yeah! I feel ya!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was great story. God can work miracles in you!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a release :jawdrop:

    almost made me draw the gat....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well expressed and felt
    i know where u coming from
     
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    Story, yours is a beautiful work in progress!
     
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    don't worry about dem kids
    things have a way of catching up
    that's how people end up on da skids
    the person that can love you the best is you
    concentrate on what you do, not what they do
    skippin school and sleeping with a whole crew
    don't grow up before you have too
    i promise you
    you'll look back on those fools
    feeling sorry for those dudes...
    peace
    khasm