Black Poetry : Why i spit (inspired by Natasha's piece)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See i spit
    so I don't have to put my dukes up
    don't get me wrong brother can knuckle
    up
    but I'd rather enhance the vision of
    a brother's third eye
    not punch him in it
    see i spit it in the morning
    before cornflakes and bananas
    about Juneteenth and Carabana
    or while washing my sweaty
    end of the day ***
    hell I spit it sometimes just to laugh
    cause
    life gets too serious sometimes
    i'd rather spit about the joy of breathing
    in free verse or rhyme
    after kool aid or
    tequila and lime
    to the back beat of a booming jeep
    or the melody of a softly blown
    wind chime

    sometimes the spit comes
    before making love
    words delivered from the heavens above
    dropping down into the aural passages
    of waiting ears...
    then the spit comes after moaning cheers
    then I just lie in the residual glow
    of the spit while she and I becum one

    sometimes i spit on the block
    to combat crack rocks
    and street jocks / positioning for
    profit / unaware of the spit
    muthaphuckas end up
    covered all in it
    they place fingers on their glocks
    take aim at my cranial spot / then stop /
    cause the truth set them free
    and minds unchained can change the game
    so we all can gain
    and maim the ***** Miss lieberty that pollutes
    the water / the daughter
    of a stolen land /
    forefathers stole now off with their hands...

    see sometimes I spit to vent
    when frustration sets in / and life
    gains weight before it's too late
    and i can no longer




    SPIT.

    (c)2002 blakverb "quik spit"
     
  2. msluciousb

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    And I got some of it on me!

    Thank God for the First Amendment, no matter what else is ruined in this nation...at least we have the gift and ability to
    "SPIT" our Positive creation...
    You go boy!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  3. shaz

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    Glad you spit it out poet,
    knowledge is power
    You spit
    And I will grow
     
  4. Natasha

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    Spit on brother man spit on

    go head on wit yo bad self and spit it loud anad spit it proud !:D
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    Spitting truth!

    As mush as we want to rap a mother* across the lips, it is true that a an enlightened mind is the better option--nice peice--well done--but every now and again, somebody just needs to have their *** whipped--naw, I didn't say that--okay keep spittin'

    Amun-Ra

    :)
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra,

    hey brother thanks. But what you say about the *** whupping is real (and I'm a peaceful brother)

    thanks


    Natasha,

    It's because of your piece that spurred this poetic "thought". Thank you for the muse.

    Shaz,

    Thanks


    MsLuciousB,

    Sister I said "duck" :) thank you queen, I will ocntinue to spit.

    blak
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.


    ...i shoulda known!! :)

    even your quik spit was g'on be funky!! :lol:
    you just bad like dat BLaK-Man!!

    keep on spittin'... 'cause i'm g'on keep on
    listenin'... that's a complete certain-ty!

    itsallLove, chile!

    elayne.
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spit till yo *** is dry

    akshunman.......





    One
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    VERB do you understand YOU ARE MY

    BITS

    and when i read hard street sh*t like this
    by you
    it's no wonder why


    peace as usual bro

    DSS
     
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