Black Poetry : Why I Love You

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  1. TwanaMosley

    TwanaMosley Member MEMBER

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    I love you more than words can say
    I love you more with each passing day
    I love you because you've been a friend
    To whom in which I can depend
    I love your lips they taste so sweet
    I love the love making in between the sheets
    I love your smile and the way that you look at me
    A look so intense it's as though you can see straight through me
    Inside my heart, inside my mind, inside my soul
    A Love so sweet and devine
    Touches do gentle, converstaions so deep
    In rememberance of the late nights we stayed up talking
    I barely did sleep
    I remember when we first met, and I had this certain glow
    Just the thought of you, the touch of you
    And on my face it did show
    That I feel in love with a man, a sweet and gentle man
    For whom which my love has grown
    Although in the begining we moved kinda fast, and had a love child as well
    Been through trials and tribulations
    Still true love prevailed
    When I say "I Love You" it's coming from the heart
    "I Love You" because your you
    "I Love You" for who you are
    You are the man of my dreams and everything my heart desires
    So believe me when I say that every word I've written is true
    You are a good man, a good father, intelligent and even kind of hansome too.
    And baby, these are the reasons in for which I am proud to say that
    "I Love You"​


    Written by: Twana Harper-Mosley
    For: Mr. Carl Mosley :heart:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A love that endures hardships and trials, that's a love to be proud of. This felt so genuine and endearing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully expressed from da hardship to the lovin hopes and courtship
    nice flowin
     
  4. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Why

    Very Nice.
     
  5. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Love :love:
    Hard to find....so fight hard to keep it


    Nice piece, I truly enjoyed it

    *****Monad.poetress
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was really sweet...
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, you got the right idea, sis: friendship that leads to love. Very nice piece.
     
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