Black Poetry : Why I dream

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  1. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    My dream

    It's my dream, my vision,
    guns.... love..... or money take a pick hurry make your decision,
    i preach with intentions ,
    that will satisfy my every dimension,
    cause im deeper than most wells so i would love if you would listen,
    but some have hard heads like the ones of those
    3 year olds sittin watchin mother gift wrappin
    That is tired from a night of lust and skin slappin
    ^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    ( the son saw his mom and santa have a good time for his present)

    My dream went for good to bad
    i started to see a 10 year old holdin a sac
    choakin on dro like foxylady's first high when i think back
    i think black........ and blue like the brusies left on every hurt heart
    and i think why it gotta be like that
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    ( his mom is a fiend and the bills need to be paid)

    You see my color is an indication
    of how much hatin is received
    and the basic 2 + 2 is not to be achieved
    You see this is why i dream
    Reality is so hard to see....... or believe,
    I try not to think of this to be true
    nig gas is out here killin each other over red and blue
    than if opposite colors of a spectrum cost my life than i dont want to see them......

    That's why i think back to black
    Where i cant face the fact
    that my face is intact

    If i didnt have eyes could i see the struggle?
    could i see rain or sun or would it matter?
    If i couldn't feel would i ever be hurt or even feel the pain of which i cant see?
    Why me? why do i get so deep between the sheets of loose-leaf?


    Cause my dream is that i can face reality and smile!
     
  2. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nuff said...

    cuz thats why I dream too. Your words were absolutey true and felt.

    Keep on dreaming in color
    The Dreamer
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hands clap 4 this.

    I'm diggin' it, keep bringin' 'em.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups to u
    dis was on point again welcome within
    da house of love peace & respect
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this here...
    it was on it...
    nice write
     
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    my goodness
    could not break away
    as you flow it straight
    and deep the sadness
    of why we dream
    Peace on this tight drop
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maad love on this one...

    If you dreamed of it...God's already given the keys to acquire it
    if it was concieved...it can be achieved...
    Dreams...do often become reality
    when you believe...even if they've been
    scribed in the folds of a loose-leaf...

    your lyrikz are deep...
    thanks for allowing my mind to take a swim...
    the flow was real...
     
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