Black Poetry : Why I Don’t Get Replies

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Mar 25, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why I Don’t Get Replies

    Feel blind fake and dense, rhymes don’t make sense
    Got a STORM of evidence now how I perform this reverence?
    Cats no longer reply as I have hunger in my eye give it
    A stronger try, they pay no attention stay in a demention live it
    You ignore me galore you see? Overlooked need a bolder hook
    No doubt Flow this without notice cats get colder I’m shook
    Stress as they regard me as a retard guess I don’t come hard
    Feel dumb and scarred even a dog Saint Bernard don’t face discard
    Difficult result has occurred can’t duck my absurd repetation
    Like a bird separation from his flock face the devastaion
    Of shock better to forget pain than cry, regret I came here
    To die like a lame fly hit by hot shot my wings flame and disappear
    Clear path to destruction without interruption, dreamt a good game
    Now a no good wimp plain a last attempt to save my name
    It’s sad for MADD to some it’s a glad fad and that’s bad
    Infinity I desire but under enemy fire worse I ever had
    Git hit wit rounds on legit grounds like soldier in combat
    Must abandon my cannon just frowns in this habitat
    Fumble in this jungle tried to rumble but now crumble
    Like crush cookies now can’t say hush to rookies or grumble
    Now humble myself to the mumble jumble all that’s left
    Put my pen down the end of my crown the quicksand waste
    No time as it erase my sick mind and expand to my face
    Grace be unto thee SINK! SINK! Now drown my head
    This clown is officially dead

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wish I could rhyme like this
    Each time I read you I wish.
    For yours is a talent you see.
    Rhyme is a powerful key.
    Not many be doin' this thang.
    Cuz it's difficulty brings disdain.
    So continue my brotha, in rhyme,
    Cuz I'm really feelin' ya this time.

    Your sista in poetry...Joyce:)
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah ! Yeah!

    Tyte flo here Bruh!!
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you on the next level with this one!!!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MADD u done took it to another notch and reppin'
    da flow in rhyme for reasons in any season da mic
    is ur's u got da floor hit me wit more...........tyght smack down!
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never fear Desert Storm is here
    Your flow is tyte
    This you already know
    So don't you cry


    Shouldn't I realize (shouldn't I realize)
    You're the highest of the highs (you're the highest of the highs)
    If you don't know it
    I'll say it
    But don't every wonder, (don't ever wonder)

    Desert Storm
     
  7. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't get replies either kid, just drive by's --just kidding. you got that rapper flow and it seems you know about Daved's.
     
  8. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    don't make me shut this B down
    yall be roam'n all over town
    look'n like clowns
    'cause ya didn't spread no nuff luv

    around

    don't me krazee up in here
    MADDD & Destee duo ta fear
    we aint hear'n no excuses
    just leave'n yall wit bruises

    :lol:

    MADDD you MADDD i'm MADDD

    :love:

    *in case no one noticed ... that was Destee MADDRAPP'N*

    :wink:
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey I'm surprise yall responded and felt this one even desteee replied now thiks had to be hot really appreciate the read and the responses
     
  10. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, please believe it MADD~One... it was like that.

    Much :heart:
     
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