Black Poetry : WHY DON'T YOU LOVE URSELF?

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I don't shuck
    And I don't duck

    But I will move out ur way

    I don't strive
    To stay alive

    Life is the only game I play

    I move
    I can't lose

    I won before it started

    All I did, claim victory

    Decided to stay right, where my heart is

    They say hearts left
    But really a heart
    gets its charge from the other side

    Left is logic, But the right is creativity

    (Inspiration) And that's what keeps you alive

    I was born to live
    Because I come from life

    I do everything physical with my left
    My right keeps my left in check
    So I naturally use the right side of my mind
    But, my brain processes, replicates and reflects

    The information transmitted from my right
    That produces the ability to see, if you have an inner light.

    A wise ole Indian Woman asked once
    How can you even function without knowing ur very own spirit

    That's a choice by the individual
    To ignor it, even tho they know they hear it

    See these voices I hear
    Don't tell me to do anything wrong

    In fact,
    The only thing they ever say is:

    Never let them steal your song

    You don't need their meds
    You don't need their traits
    You don't need to join their cause

    Because really and truly u have a purpose
    And that's the only thing that's exclusively yours
     
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    I really enjoyed how you incorporated the "left brain-vs-right" brain data.


    And as a fellow Piscean, I can relate to that "creative" side of you.

    Perhaps, we Pisces are more adept at handling both sides having that duality in the 2 fish.....Maybe one represents the "left brain" (analytical) and the other, the right brain (creativity)?

    Just thinking out loud....

    But, sincerely, I enjoyed how you presented this! And the title was especially interesting.
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    thanks sis,

    I think we Pices can become dominant on both sides, but if one takes over and is not balanced.... get ready... lol

    I do everything left handed.... so naturally I would use the creative side

    I wonder why the catholic school I went to use to slap ur left hand and force u to write with ur right....... hmmmmm

    think about the right and left in terms of right side being female element and left being male.... all within urself.....

    u harminize that .....

    so my physical is already ambidextrous....

    if the spiritual refelcts that then i can see the father, son.. holy ghost in u...

    and u can see

    mind, body and soul in me......

    unity is a psychological decision.

    first of mind, body and soul and then like minds...... regardless of the way it is expressed.

    peace
     
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